Reviews for Till Death
Flushing chapter 11 . 5/15/2008
i really hope that you update soon i really like your story.
jamie chapter 11 . 1/26/2008
i really like this story, i like how they have to take the role as the captains and how they fight for womens rights as well...i know you haven't updated in a while but i do hope you update soon
dreamer1010 chapter 11 . 8/2/2006
lol update soon ok this is a great story and i can't wait! please update soon!
LoveableLittleDemon chapter 3 . 7/11/2006
there just one litle tiny thing wrong with this story... DID YOUFUCKING KNOW YOU NAME KAGOME'S FATHOR AFTER HER FUCKING BRITHER. I WAS REALLY CONFUSED DAMNIT. THATS BULL SHIT
Punk Chicky chapter 11 . 2/10/2006
i really like this story, very good in my opion! :)
Jamie chapter 11 . 11/17/2005
Wow, this is actually pretty good. I have a question though...the little pile of skulls, was that just because she just naturally has a ton of skulls, or was it more of the crew members? Also, I think I should point out you made a tiny mistake right here

'“What the hell! I thought I fucking told you to stay away from me! Ya told me, and I quote, ‘Screw you Inuyasha!’” He grinned' You didn't space out what she said and what he did, you made it one saying. Great job besides that. I'll be checking back and hoping that you UPDATE SOON. You did a pretty good job, and I actually kind of like the change of not having a huge author's note at the top giving an excuse for why they didn't update for a long time or something. Keep up the great work and good luck with the rest of your stories. UPDATE SOON. Bye.
InuYash'sGirl chapter 11 . 10/3/2005
love teh story keep it up pz do me a huge favore and work on the relation ship between inuyasha and kagomi it really sucks at the time and pz help us understand more abought the crew. like how menny people are in it it seems like its a small crew att eh time and you kinda need to describe how demands got on the ship better. cus it really makes no sece dosnt a captin know his crew? and for sang hurry up and find the medicine cus i dought ya ganna let her die. and whats with the hell hole in murokus hand. (i cant spell sr bought that) its like he never uses it and are all teh baddles ganna be inu/kag? add in other carictors what abought getting more men on the ship or woman? like kags school friends and common make up some of your own carictors and is kikio inus ex? this is kinda un clear here. and you might as well add more discriptin to the war seans its like rated PG common you can do better than that. the only problem in this story is u lack deatal and some parts are unclear such as when shee took a bath the transition from dinner to the bath was like is she bating at teh resterant or on a ship? is her ship a big ship or a small ship? dont kill me here just trying to help

keep up the good work
MM chapter 11 . 9/18/2005
yeh! this story has updates from the last time i read it! _
MM chapter 7 . 9/18/2005
ohno! ot kaggie 2!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/30/2005
that was good but i've read better and i just wanted to coment on Kagome's mouth she 10 years old for crying out loud! She shouldent be saying asshold and jerk! even if she lives with pirates like hello!
Nicole chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
Ok first its lke a really good story but i wouldnt call Kagome's father Souta like its just not right!
adoremeplease chapter 11 . 8/25/2005
Please update soon. You are very creative great story!
blackair99 chapter 11 . 8/9/2005
wow i didn't expect yura to b n there. but this chapter rocks! i liked that they were huggin and kagome amitted that she doesn't hate him. great job! okay yeah i know that sounded retarded but hey what the hell. i couldn't think of anything else to say. post soon! later gaiter
windgal chapter 11 . 8/9/2005
awesomeness! PLEASE update ASAP! this is awesome! XD
Kita Tsuki chapter 11 . 7/31/2005
Update soon!
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