Great characterizations. Good take on Duncan's pov after he discovers her betrayal.

Leto isn't dead... He becomes Worm.

I love this! It's so difficult to track down good Dune fic! (Let alone one that portrays Duncan as well as this!) It's beautifully written, beautifully in character, very true to the books, very true to Duncan, and to Alia, and to their relationship. Very well done! (*SO* adding this to my favourite stories list!)

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An excellent piece - very nice characterisations.

*Applauds* Bravo!

I much like this piece. I guess it's because the only couple in "Dune" that I ever rooted for was Alia/Duncan. And must I say that I liked Hayt much more than all the other gholas (except for the last one, which comes pretty close on my favorites list).

The tragism in this is almost palpable. Love it. Keep up the good work.

-Azzy Meg