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MARVELOUS

Okay,I like your books and all,but you need to work on your sentences. They are too many run-on sentences,and most of them are very long. You need variety. Good luck!

I love this fic so far! great job! I will post another review when I finish.

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LOVE THE ENTHUSIASM! :)

Good story. I really like Roth.

I love the little ironic twist where Legolas is like

"Anyone…say a dwarf?" asked Legolas, questioning the genuineness of the proposal. He highly doubted he would ever become that close with a dwarf. It would be the dwarves that would drive him to the West!"

Very funny.

Very sad chapter, not helped by the fact that i am watching Starwars I near the end

Haha i dont think they will be coming home speedily... at least not as speedily as everyone would hope, i mean its the twins estel and Legolas we are talking about here,

I just read the whole thing with like day breaks in it...to much torture! HOW DARE YOU PUT THAT THING IN LEGOLAS'S MOUTH! Evil person...now I want more Leggy torture, look what you did jk XD I'll be reading more of your stories sometime soon.

-Martiny

I think i like this story even more than it's sequel! (and that is saying a lot). have a cookie.

hey. just wanted to say i finished ur story. and it really was enjoyable. hahas. thanks

have been reading your various stories for sometimes now... hahas. but always tot it will look quite wrong to review when the story has long been uploaded... yeah. anw. it has really been enjoyable. looking forward in reading the following chaptersD

Whislt waiting for Dementia to come out, I have re-reading all of your past stories. This time in the correct order. *grin* The Folly of Men is the first story I ever read by you two. As a matter of fact, it's also the best fic you have written so far. Anyway, the reason I'm reviewing is to nit-pick. Why am I nit-picking? Because I'm bored and until Dementia comes out I have nothing better to do. So I shall nit-pick. Well it's not so much a nit-pick as a question (and by now a long and rambling question). My question is this: what sort of elf is Caranfëa? I know that he lived in Mirkwood before he was captured, so I am going to assume he is Silvan. He [i]could[/i] be Sindarin, but that is VERY unlikely, seeing as the only elves in Mirkwood that were of Sindarin desent were the royals, and I don't think that would include Caranfëa. So in my mind he is most likely Silvan. That is all well and good, except for one, small but ever so important detail: The Silvan elves never went to Valinor. The Silvan elves were a group that split off from the Teleri, hence, they never answered the summons and therefor could not sail to Valinor later as the Noldor could. So the part about Caranfëa refusing to go west makes no sence, he couldn't have gone if he had wanted too! Even Legolas should not have gone, it was only his involvment in the War of the Ring that allowed him to go (like with Bilbo, Frodo and Gimli). Now, I could have just misunderstood you about 'going west' and so am throwing a hissy fit for no reason. Or Caranfëa could be Noldor, (though living in Mirkwood would make that EXTEREMELY unlikely) and I am once again throwing a fit over nothing. Anyway, could you please send me an email explaining this? I would be most greatfull.

Da svedania!

Gwyn

Hm. I suppose I should say poor elves and ranger... but I won't!Mwahahahah! TOURTURE! TOURTURE! TOURTURE!

Well...what can I say?*blinks innocently*I'm evil. For some reason, unknown to all including myself, I think I fell in love with that stubborn, annoying, willful, ect, Caranfea. He still has no chance when compaired to my Legolas or Estel. Sorry. Roth is sorta endearing and so sweet. You two do enough damage all by yourselves, I see no reason to threaten you into doing more*puts away machine gun* Congratulations! I think your the first people to get of the hook for that. Keep on tourturing the poor little guys!