1st chapter: Good, very good.

2nd chapter: Pretty good, but I may mention he's and eighth alien, not a quarter.

3rd chapter: Ok, though why didn't he use his powers? How old is he? Just my little questions.

I love this mini series... Please continue.

Please can you update. I like this story. It's good.

Awesome! I'm lovin this!

What a cliffhanger. Write more soon.