awesome story)

I think that your plot is very good, but your transitions are really fast and a little sloppy. You seem to jump from one seen to the next and don't really explain or differentiate the jumps. Also why didn't nick have his gun? Very good idea though and I look forward to what will come next.

OKie it was a cool story...but... you shoulda made it longer put more details into it. Other then that good story! I mean i read it in like 15 mins.

i love your story!

I thought it was ok, i really think u should make a sequel, i want to see how mich turns out.

Ooh! Good begining. I think I'll read the rest now. See ya in my next review!

You should totally do a sequel. Great story!

Er... *raises hopefully inoffensive hand* Whatever happened to the little girl and the old lady?

I absolutely loved this fic, and personally I would love to read a sequel about Nick's recovery, hope you get enough support to do one:)

Happy New Yearx

I'm not so sure I like your writing style but I like your plot. So good job.

Good story. Would be interesting to read a sequel. Maybe have the other character's views on Nick and maybe a little romance?

Dude your story kicks butt, you so have to do a sequel

It was okay.

If you do a sequel please don't make a slash.

plz do a Sequel. I wanna see more of Nick and Greg's bond.

Thanks

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE where's the rest?

Just discover this story and I want to know what's happening!

Please give me more.

Great story. Waiting for the rest..

Have a wonderfull inspiring writing evening