Wow... Envy killed them? Dude... That's... so...

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COOL! 5/5! AWESOME!

I love your style, and you made my day.

I was stalking my favorite authors, and I found this. Yay my day is complete! Envy deserves more love on this site. He's such an evil character, after all. X3

Off to read more of your stories, and maybe see those Sues you were talking about! XD

~3

Whoa, like wow. You really do have a way with words.

Absolutely amazing.

I had to read it twice, but it was worth it. This was great. Envy is amazing

Jesus H. Author Christ that is genius! That is just, wow. That was a lot of things. I really love how you wrote it, it took me a while to actually understand what was happening but that's like wow! Beutifully executed. Envy can get away with perfect murder. He's done it once before, and now he's done it twice more in this. That was crazy wonderful, and amazingly written(is amazingly a word?). I love your work so very, very much.

O.o uh...that was weird.

TERRY: I totally agree, what was the point. I could barely tell what was going on.

ME: *sigh* Terry u idiot, I understood perfectly.

TERRY: No u didn't u are as clueless as I am

ME: I am not it was very complicated but I think I sortta understand it.

TERRY: sure u do.

ME: uh well good story I think

-Darth Maul was here

(join the dark side we've got cookies)

(Hail all that's unholy)

Hn. Neat what-if.

Superb. You capture Envy magnificently, and the style it's written in really adds to that. Also, I love the reference to him as an "artist." Good job.

The way you started and ended was beautiful. I really liked it, the description was wonderful as well. I love how you captured Envy's character. Excellant!

Oh my God, you have no idea how beautiful that is. It's like a poem. They should make a song out of this!

This is my absolute favorite FMA one-shot. I read it over and over all the time and I recommend it to everyone! Hell, I trap people in my room so I can read it too them. ;; You should have seen the look on my cousin's face when I forced him to listen! Mwahaha... XD

But seriously, this is wonderful fic, very good job.

I like your stories, I do. And though it was hard to read, I like how you made the fragmented thoughts run into each other, like how Envy's own thoughts run over themselves in his haste to get even. I hope to see more from you soon, even though I know this is an older piece and I've since read newer things. )

I am severely pained. Which means I liked it. A lot.

This is really great, you've captured Envy's character from what little we've seen of it in the manga and expanded on it in a believable way. Plus the story successfully creeped me the hell out.

Perhaps, as you said, it was a bit "overly artsy" and the weird html errors(?E/p - these things)drove me bonkers but it was still impressive.