OMG! I love it! Your an great author!

Hey, it's Sam. Sorry I wasn't able to comment on this for a while. My parents sent me to sleep away camp for a few days. Anyhoo, I like it so far, keep up the great work and read my latest story, "Children of Lucifer."

jeez what took you so long? amazing fanfic. love it!

well done chapter. update soon

okay i love this but come on when was the last time you wrote another chapter!

This is such a wonderful fic you have jakxkeira and tronxashelin the way it was meant to be (not that I’m against other parings ya just don’t see this that often.)

Please don't leave it hanging!

must...know...what happens!

awsome chapter. wats gonna happen next? hm?

What the HELL are those? Run Ashelin run. I think YOur wishing you would've climbed that cliff. Up-date soon.

Nice job. I especially liked the clincher sentence; that was well thought out.

Well done! Byes,

K'sani

Ashelin yoiu should of listened to Torn. for that i laugh at you*laughs like a henya* please update soon

Ashelin, this is one of those 'I told you so' moments. Next time listen to the man. Up-date soon.

Gasp! ASHELIN! NO!

Actually... I'm not too worried about her. She can take care of herself.

*cries* NO, not ANOTHER cliffie! Meanie... *sniff* Poor Ashelin...

Ya know, though I never really thought about it, you make a decent fluff writer. I liked how you did the TornAshelin stuff. :)

Just one thing, maybe you should put the hypens in the dialogue instead of out of them. Here, an example for ya:

“Ashelin” – he warned.

Just stick it in right after the n. And that's pretty much all the constructive criticism I can give ya, coz this is so great.

Awesome job, and it was a quick update, I must say. :)

See ya,

K'sani

kool chapter. wats gonna happen to Ashlen? o...

love the story... you should definitely do some TornAshelin... that would be great... again, love the story, keep writing!