Sorry. The previous review was from me, but for some reason, it wasn't posted under my account.

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Good story, and an interesting twist concerning Christine's early life in The Nine Kingdoms.

Just a couple of things.

Like someone has pointed out already, if Jessica's sixteen, then she would have been born two years before Christine left New York. If she was born in The 4th Kingdom, then she would be no more than fourteen.

There are just a few grammatical things: there were quite a few fragment sentences, as well as commas where they weren't needed. Also, there were quite a few times where you used 'to' instead of 'too.' Just little 'housekeeping' issues, if you will. All in all, your grammar and structure are good. If you ever want a beta, let me know.

Looking forward to a sequel. It should prove to be interesting. :)

Good story, and an interesting twist concerning Christine's early life in The Nine Kingdoms.

Just a couple of things.

Like someone has pointed out already, if Jessica's sixteen, then she would have been born two years before Christine left New York. If she was born in The 4th Kingdom, then she would be no more than fourteen.

There are just a few grammatical things: there were quite a few fragment sentences, as well as commas where they weren't needed. Also, there were quite a few times where you used 'to' instead of 'too.' Just little 'housekeeping' issues, if you will. All in all, your grammar and structure are good. If you ever want a beta, let me know.

Looking forward to a sequel. It should prove to be interesting. :)

I love this story it's one of my absolute favourites but some things don't seem to add chapter 10 it's clarified that Virginia's 21 and everyone knows her mother left her when she was 7 but Jessica's 16 meaning Christine would have had her 2 years before she left. Plus in the series Christine said she doesn't have a daughter. The mirror to forget would have explianed why she didn't remember Virginia but not Jessica. It's very confusing and I can't get my head round it so could you please email me the explanations because I can't think of any.

I just have to say please, please write a sequel I spend nearly every minute of every day thinking of what could happen in the sequel(and thay always take place 10 years in the furture with Virginia and Wolfs 10 year old son and 7 year old daughter and Wendell and Evelyns 7 year old daughter too). I even go to bed thinking about it so please get round to writing it. I'm begging you.

From Fantasylunargirl aka J A McGinn

Great story loved it. I can't wait to read more and find out what happens with everyone, especially Evelyn and Wendell.

this made me lol cause my name's Evelyn too. Great so far can't wait to read th rest

I only had time to get this far but I really like it. I hope I can find the time to read the rest of it :)

This is brilliant !

Is now definately one of my fave fics of all time.. from any film/tv programme, whatever !

It is soo well written and it's so believable that this could be the sequel if and once they start doin it :o)

Just brilliant !

Hope you do write a sequel to this.. would make Im sure everyones day.. month.. year ! lol !

Look forward to readin more of your work,

Keep it up !

Saz

It's been awhile since this stories been active I suppose, but I like it, good job, and I hate to drag up old news, but you were right, its the Baa-Bar not the Baa Baa Bar, first instincts are always best.

You've really made a great story.. if I were you I would make another one about this, you did a great job

You will write a sequal?

Oh, this is wonderful!

I was so afraid, that we would nerver get to know about the baby and the live of the now married couple.

Please, write the sequal, I love this story so mush and I dont want it to end so soon!

This chapter was quite funny, with Red and all.

But It makes me want a sequal so mush, especially because of the end.

What does Jessica plan?

Where is Reds place in this plan?

Would she really help Jessica against Virginia and Wolf?

Oh, i am so interestet in this story, so please go on soon!

LonelyWillow

amazing! I loved this show and you did so well with the characters. I love wolf. I'm going to read on as soon as I get the time, K?

hey, good job on this story, i really liked it. you kept true to the book and movie of the first one. good luck on the sequel to this, i'll be looking forward to it.

This is a cool story

Thank heavens you finally finished it! I loved it. Very original, great new characters, interesting story. The ending was fine, except I would have liked to see more interaction between Wolf and Red, since it would set up the next story. But I'll be looking forward to seeing where you will take the plot in the sequel. Well done, Karen :)

A great ending to a great story. You created a fantastic story, and I really enjoyed reading it. It would have to be one of my favoutrite fanfics. I cant wait for the sequel. It sounds really interesting.