these storys are good you should mack them into 1 big one

Oh, dear. Something tells me we're going to see why, Elizabeth is daddy's little girl...just don't let her do something really, really stupid. Please.

I am really enjoying the series. and would be interested in reading another one.

Please continue this. I love how you portray Lizzie.

Tainted was a good description word. Good job. Keep it up. And for the record, i still want it as one story!

I just read the four stories in the Lizzie series. I think that it's an original idea and that you're doing very well with drawing out the story. However, I would recommend getting a beta reader to proof read your stories because there are some spelling mistakes. Everyone makes them and it's hard to proof read your own stories, because you know what you're trying to say and tend to read it that way. A beta is like an extra set of eyes.

Great story. Keep it in little short storie's. I like reading the little storie's:)

This is really good. Just like your other stories. I hope they catch the teacher who is doing this!

Still very very good. You're not going to have anything happen to our dearest Lizzie, are you? Well if you do hope the guy pays badly for it in the end ;) Bravo

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Get him, Fin. Or Lizzie'll do it for you.

Really could - please continue. Hope to see some O/E in there too. Even if you don't include it - i think it's stille xcellent.

another great one from you! Sorry about not reviewing 'Broken', but I've been so buzy. I actually would like to see them in one big 'journal' I guess you could call it, but one-shots work too! I'm gonna read 'em either way!

Happy Writing!

adios,

Jessica

whoa...these just keep getting better and better. I sure hope you keep going with these stories...I'd love to read more of them, they're awesome!