Wow, I really love this story. You're doing really well on the plot building, I can't wait for all the action. Having Reno drop by was good too, you don't see him much around here since he's not really from Kingdom Hearts but he's one of my favourite characters so it makes me happy. I feels sad you had to kill Sora though, can't you just put him in a coma T_T Anyways the whole thing was excellent. One suggestion I want to make is for you to seperate the scenes, it can get pretty confusing for the reader.

oh man, i really like the flashbacks to cloud's past... i hope you'll con't this one... seems like it's abandoned :(

this is a great story! you really should continue it! please update it again soon!

muahhaha poor cloud , riku and wha sora died! does riku have like a crush on cloud because he looks like sora? isnt the iron giant a nice guy hehe (thinking of the movie)

i think your story was a load of shit i HATE IT I HATE IT I HATE IT!just kidding it was the best story i HAVE READ _ PLZ DONT STOP WRITING!(GOOD ONE) I AM GIVING YOU THE THUMBS UP...

Wonderful, its truly a great story. I like the way you made Cloud out to be sort of wussy but not overly so. Its a different and likable side of him. Im as aspiring writer also so when I finish mine, if I can get up the courage to send it to the sight, please read it and tell me what you think, E-mail me if you have anymore, I would dearly like to read them

I dunno whether this was just overly rushed, or what, however... It didn't have the same quality as the first chapter, in my opinion. Well, mind you, I was rather distracted. it took me, like, over an hour to read because of all the interruptions, so that might be part of it, however... It WAS very jointed and confusing; a lot of stuff just didn't really make sense, and the way that the scenes aren't separated at all, it made it hard to really get into the different storylines. Not to worry, I'm sticking with this fic, I just had to point it out. I should reread sometime when I'm not...DOING so much. Ha ha. But, the parts that I DID comprehend, were well done as always, and enjoyable. Kuja and Cloud, lovers! ::GLOMPTACKLELOVE:: I love you... _ That's a great idea, too bad about Kuja's death, though. Maybe some fluffy flashbacks, ne? _ ::hug:: well, keep up the nice work. I may not have enjoyed this quite as much as the first chapter (gotta be honest, that I do) but I still loved it!

this is good! i am excited! now, to read more of your stuff.

sorry, but i gotta jump in to defend the author on that one. brunet/te is a french word, a language whose nouns are all gendered. thus brunette for a female, brunet for a male (and blonde/blond, much the same).

::gawks:: Holy... Okay. I love you. ::molest:: Dewd, this rocked a LOT. Mwe, I want morre. And I love Squall/Cloud, so there. ::giggles insanely:: Cloud and Squall's personalities were both, just, awesome. Once again. I lub you. Lublublublub. And now for something that's been bothering me for a while; it's brunette. You always put brunet. ...That's all! ::runs off::