Great story, I'd love to know what happens next, but I just now noticed the recent update was years ago. Is this story dead?

love this story

Oooh he hired Fang. I've really enjoyed this story ( especially Espio. ) so pretty please continue! Thanks for looking at this review.

Definitely the best Chaotix fic on the net, and probably a steep contender for the Sonic category overall. I'm sure we're not going to see the story finished at this point, but if you ever revisit it, would there be any chance of posting an outline or something for how the ending would have gone? I'm terribly curious.

Favorited.

"WE′RE THE CHAOTIX !" "SHA–BOOM!"

I loled so hard

I love this story, when are you going to update?

I can finally review this! I read this story long before I got an account and loved it. You have an orignal and interesting take on some of my favorite Sonic characters. Please update this story when convenient! I'm dying to find out what happens next!

"That sucks!"

"You guys suck!"

"This sucks!"

"Chao food sucks!"

You'd think he'd learn.

I've read all 15 chapies. MAKE ANOTHER! NOW! You so rock! Espio, in love with Rouge? Me likey! You added facts too. Lizards do lose they're tails. Imagining Esp losin' his makes me laugh. They remind me of a family... sort of. Vector's the dad, Charmy's the hyper-active six-year-old kid and Espio's the slightly-emo, pessimistic roomate/big brother that has a horn. I wanna know what happens to Avery! I love that name for her. Did I tell you this is the first story I read on netraptor/fanfiction? I love you. Sorry. I ment you're stories. I love them. I love Espio. Yes.

what a way to finish off! all these cliffhangers and the last update has been over a year ago...

but after all, some stories take over fifty years to find their ending, right? ;)

wishes are eternal...

hm, so this actually is a sort of continuation of your other fic. Shadow in his current state is kind of sad, though. Didnt the other story end with him getting the personality and past of a bounty hunter, friend and partner of rouge? he now reminds me a little bit of mekion in netraptors fanfics...

well, lets see whether we might get some insight in his character later? final chapter, here I come! :)

...shadow and omega? so, could this actually be team dark? I *had* been thinking of rouge when i read your summary and could never really get over the idea of her being the 'uncatchable master thief' - the obsession with jewels, the eye-colour, her working for GUN and her entire personality just seemed too big a coincidence. the only thing not fitting quite in was the whole mouse issue...but in a world where scales live next to feathers, I thought plastic surgery might stretch that little bit further, too...

just a few of my wild theories your fic led me to entertain. another very interesting chapter, you give Charmy wonderful character depth with both avery (is that really a girls name?) and the loss of his parents as intriguing conflicts. wonderful work.

I think them being forced on stage unprepared was the best scene including the Chaotix I ever read.

Espio scares me, though - seems to be *really* cold-hearted in your fic, huh? well, lets see whether hell have a change of heart after all or not...

the bits of their background story you drop here and there are embedded in th story very nicely - its fun piecing such a puzzle together, even though Ive never played Knuckles Chaotix. :)

One last thing I was wondering about: Stuarts appearance - hes based of that teacher guy in Sonic X, right? I *love* such little references.

say, what does "(to) mace sb" mean? most of the time i can figure out these colloquialisms but now Im confused... .

also, the floating island being only a _Legend_? what kind of reality are you creating here?

and I have to admit im curious how long itll take for the enforcer to figure out that his precious ID card has been stolen...and in what kind of trouble espy will be then.

vectors call to find ellie was priceless...and having those two chao in there as a simile to the little runt was very creative. :)