it is beautiful

Sooo good! We need more fanfics from you!

This was awesome!

so sweet!

That was great

Just one thing...its done really very beautifully...its that type of story where U feel U were a part of it...luvd it...

Nice work! I particularly loved how Inuyasha returned. The circular ending with their relationship beginning again... *thumbs up* interesting twist on the Jewel too!

awwwwwwww! i love this story! THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH FOR WRIGHTING IT! YOU HAVE MADE THE WORLD A BETTER PLACE!

I was really going to cry when Inuuasha used her and I thought Inuyasha is dead.. Scary.. It's romantic and kind of unique

Good. Really good! Loved it!

*sniffle* He lost his puppy ears! *pouts* Ah well, I enjoyed the story regardless. Thank you so much for writing this story! :D

Hello im new to this site but i just wanted to say that this was a CUTE and AUSOME story! Hope you do well and make more!

i thought this story was excellently written. i really enjoyed the plot... it is very unusual and i really liked it. it kept my attention and was very unpredictable. i already said it but i really liked this style of story.

Wow, this is the second time reading this and I didn't know I hadn't reviewed before!

You said you were inspired by a manga oneshot? Could you by any chance give me the name?

Anyways, excellent story!

I absolutely loved this story! From the beginning to the very end I was completely hooked. There was one question running though my mind though. At the beginning it said that four demons were sent to mingle with the humans and yet there is no other mention about them; was there a reason for that? I am probably missing something, but it was just confusing me.

Anyway, I just wanted to say that the story was absolutely brilliant with all of its twists and turns! Brilliant job! ;)