Peter wasn't ugly! He was just fat. He was unattractive, but not ugly! And his hair wasn't greasy, snivellus's was. And yuckkkkk I hateeee Nancy! Ugly bitch! Sirius belongs to Remus!

Lol I loveeeeee James, but which girl oggles him when there's padfoot ? . And who tffff is this stupid Nancy!? What about wolfstar?

What load of bull is this.

From Nancy to Nancy Alice to Alice what the heck

Obviously, you suddenly just inserted the name Alice into Nancy Alice. Which only shows that you're trying to correct your mistake in your characters. Considering that it should be Alice from the start. Alice Longbottom not Nancy Alice longbottom.

I loved it do much! But now I'm crying...

Btw, u spelled prophecy wrongly

Oh my God I have been wondering if Nancy was Alice. But then I said to myself no her name is Nancy not Alice. Oh my God plot twist. But now I can't even hear Lily talk to her because I know that she's going to end up tortured into madness. It was hard enough whenever I heard James and the others talk to Frank. Maybe I'll just have to pretend that this story ends differently

I must say I am flustered by how much heart you have put into this story, I just love it. It's got good words and an awesome plot, emphasising on hardships of love and the prophecy. Although I come across occasional spelling or grammatical errors, the story itself put asides all these little matters. I really hope you consider writing some strories maybe on wattpad or this website about harry and ginny, and I really would like to know you, you have very good mind of a real author. Bravo :0)

Perfectionnn

I'M LISTENING TO HEARTBREAK GIRL BY 5SOS CURRENTLY AND IT LITERALLY RELATES TO THIS SO MUCH OMG

I like to think that albus made james and Lily head boy and girl solely because he shipped them hard.

loved it. absolutely loved it. :)

oneshot suggestion: ron & hermine's first time ;)

Travis is such a jerk! he is a blithering idiot! a slimy git! a... a... A DIRTY OLD WANKER! :(