This is so fucked up. Nuff said. Great writing but this is just so fucked in the head. I couldn't stop reading at chapter 20, and skipped to the end to see more bullshit happen. Phenomenal writing but Goddamn

Omnisage here on logged out status...thumbs up, good that is all I really have to say. Strong beginning and strong finish...keep it up.

I seriously think you can rewrite and publish this into a script or something. It's really emotional and chock full of huge twists and turns. Loved it but I got soda at the crap they had to go through. I will never love a woman names Sera thanks to your fic. Haha. Thanks for being awesome!

Any chance you'll finish your other Squinoas?

Cheers

Keep Writing

For a sorceress, Rinoa's damn weak. I mean c'mon just Angel wing the biatch already. Sheesh so much for SeeD training. At the very least block the blow or something.

Sorry just super pissed at the moment.

Cheers

Keep Writing

this...is...one epic fan-fic I have ever read...the drama...the tension and the heartbreak Armageddon...it's all here...I love this fic for it's emotion

holy S #$, that was just terrifying, Sera killed Julia...this is getting crazy for a fan-fic, that in fact I love how you made this story so dramatic so far (I know I swore to not review but F%& this is getting Tense) where's Squall when you need him

wow wtf Ashleigh is such a little B&*%! Rinoa is in trouble, Hope Squall doesn't fall for Ashleigh, the tension is growing, I'll have to read up to the end

I think Seifer is acting more like Squall then his game self (usually Seifer is one for booasting a lot and being well cocky while Squall is usually quiet and mostly doesn't express his thoughts out) while I can see Ashleigh being more like Seifer save she is the biggest brat so far but hey the story is nice considering this is the longest story I have ever read so far. nice

First thing is first. Ash and sera are some hardcore bitches. God they are mean. Secondly I just want to let you know that this story deeply disturbed me sometimes when I was reading it. I can relate to rinoa very well because I had a brother that would act just like ash. He would destroy my favorite things and get on my moms side and yell at me for it. My dad was always at wok so I had no one to defend me. This brought back some hard memories to face. I am still praying that my brother sees what he has been doing like ash has and decides to change himself.

Other than that, the story was very good. Great detail in writing, it made me feel like I was there. And like I said before, that was not always a good memory to bring back. Great idea for the story, very creative. All inall I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you for the story.

The story was magnificently written! I loved how I could feel all of their emotions as if they were my own-especially Rinoa's. I really like your writing style and how you portrayed the characters accurately. Jeez, I really hated Ashleigh and Sera!

Nothing bad, but I'm just a bit disappointed that it turned out to be less like Final Fantasy and a lot more like a teenage drama book and also, unfortunately for us people on Earth, like real life. I look forward to reading more of your stories! :)

oh my god. i just re-read the story. i forgot how amazing it is!some great cheesy love lines in there, but you make it work so all is good lol!

xDD Somehow I knew Seifer would put Rinoa in a situation like that, hehe.

Wow. It seems like every single time I read this story it brings tears to my eyes. Amazing!

And yes, I chose some random chapter to review.

Honestly, I don't know how anyone can't like this story. It brings me to tears. There are very few authors out there with the talent that you have.

You should rewrite this story... but in a new way. Take those characters and make it inot an original story. Honestly, this is a book you should try to get published. It's that amazing. I think I've said this quite a few times to you.

But I'm begging you...

Please do that! )

I'll probably end up reading this again sometime soon.

well it's about time

If they don't get back together i swear i will track you down and make you get them back together it won't be that hard you live in Sydney,i live in Sydney