that was one hell of a story! BRAVO!

Great story! It had wonderful characterization, a meaty plot, and proper syntax (which is more than I can say about a lot of the stuff at ). I really liked how you dealt with Hawkgirl's return, as well as your utilizing Flash in his "conscience" roll. And even though I don't watch anime, your supplementary satire was quite funny. I love Harvey Birdman and his power of attorney! You should write a Harvey fic!

WOW! A tremendous tour de force. You managed to keep the pace lively during all the chapters. An excellent work. I have a quibble with the language directed at the women, but the story itself was well plotted and well done.

I'm adding it my highly recommended list!