You know I really liked this story!...I could see you maturing as it progressed... Thank You,

revisited this story again after at least 6 years... still hooks me straight from the first chapter. The depth of the characters is amazing and after another reread I came across more details again that I missed before... the plot is amazingly well-built and the hidden antagonist well constructed. great use of flashbacks! Spoiler alert
the small detail that the creator cannot change objects and only minds is a lovely subtle hint and even though would be great to read how they all remembered going from that note to the present is still in flow of the story.

ughhhh no. I hate him, like Legolas! There shouldn't be this guy in the beginning.

THE FEELS. MyFaceBurnsFromAllTheFeels is what I was going to put. BUT. Thank you for writing such an interesting, and heart wrenching and awesome and ... -could keep going for days- Story. I plan on browsing through anything else you have that may catch my eye. Then again, my head may explode and my eyes melt if I find more feels such as this story xD. Oh jeez, I actually ran out of tissue. I'm definitely glad it ended xD. Up until my boyfriend came out to talk to me, I was totally immersed in the story. I will admit, I was a bit "meh" about the story somewhere in the early chapters and nearly closed out of the tab, but out of curiosity I kept going and I have little regrets about it :D Well. Besides my face and skull trying to kill me. All of this emotion and there was a happy ending. The joy that fills me while my head calms down xD. Thank you again for writing this. Though it was completed in '06, I'm glad I was able to read it now in '14. Fanfiction, Author Allora, thank you.

BRAVO! BRILLIANT! I can't believe how many times I freaking cried during reading this masterpiece. I know it's stupid to follow the story when it has long since been over, but I'm on my mobile and I want to add this to my community (need a marker).

LOVE! SIMPLY LOVE!

when will legolas come into the picture? :P

An ending perfect for such an amazing story. I read it all in two days, by the day. And thank you, for a very wonderfull time, with (part of) my favorite characters!

I don't think I will find the right words. I hade a feeling about her returning, because of some lines here and there, with "Victoria, please wake up" and "Seven years is a very long for a coma". I can't wait to see the end!

"decide between my first love and the love that had saved me from myself". Excellent!

Another wonderfull chapter. And this is also an very original fic.

I have to stop, I have work tomorrow. But the story is so interesting! Yes, is a very good angst. Poor Victoria! So much to bear!

What writers block? Another wonderfull chapter!

I wanted to said "Amazing chapter" on every other ones. This, in particullar. I'm so glad Ana has survived...My daughter is also Ana. And I can't wait to see next!

More angst? I hope she will not be taken by orcs!

"Love is a powerful word Faerlian". Agree! You are a wonderfull , again!