Excellent sequel!

Hmm... How will Canas use it? Somebody's gonna be cheating on their wife today!

Wallace and Vaida definitely looks like one of the funnier FE pairings, but this last chapter was a nice way to stick in Hector and Eliwood.

I wish a third story to the series was made. I think there can be a way to round everything up to a conclusion. If you're so worried about the title of a third story, come up with a different one. Just a suggestion. :)

~Have a great day, week, fortnight, month, whatever~

I didn't think you'd bring back that argument, but it was funny. This story was very well written and kept everyone perfectly in character the entire time. It was great to be able to read without having to wonder why someone does something that just doesn't fit them. I can't wait for the next installment, if one's to come up at all.

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Short and sweet, I liked this chapter. After this though, I would have to say that if it were me, I would follow Guy's example and toss it. And I really should have known it was Priscilla that he liked...

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Yes, it was fairly long, but it kept my attention the whole way through, quite well I might add. Kent and Sain tearing around the camp after one another strikes me as something that would be rather commonplace, so I always thought Lyn would be used to things like that.

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Sain looked crestfallen. "What? Seriously...?"

That made me laugh, but Sain is definitely thinking of the wrong FE world, considering Lucia is in PoR. As for Lucius...I didn't think he was terribly feminine in the game, but as soon as I got a look at his character portrait on PoR I got a little weirded out. I mean, did the game designers give him curves on purpose?

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I like your use of the class change items, wearing the ring to help her master magic really makes sense. I also would hope that no one finds Lucius reading a certain document, although it would be very funny.

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As funny as it was, I'm glad you cut off their little shouting match, it would have become tiresome. As for the scroll...this can only get better!

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True, it wasn't as good as the first one, I didn't actually laugh out loud...so no lol for you. But it was still funny, and Sir Wallace was exactly as I imagined he would be if given a bit more character elaboration. I would say it was a little short though, is another one coming our way?

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I do like it so far. Although I am not sure what Raven was talking about when he said "First Lucius and now Priscella."

Is he saying they are acting odd or something?

I am hoping to see something come from the Guy/Priscella and the

Lyn/Sain angles though onesided relationships aren't fun for any

body.

I like several Kent/? pairings to hetro or with Sain I think

many of the Kent/Sain's are funny, but I like them I mean come on, when you really care about a person they say you fall in love with their soul. If you are that in love with someone

gender shouldn't always be an issue.

Anyway love part one love part two hoping to see part three where some of this is resolved. Maybe a Raven/Lucius? some of

those can be nice too. Even if it just ends up with them not in love but hanging around each other so they aren't alone and running an orphanage or something.

It is tough to pull off sequels but you mastered it! 10/10!

Nice. _ I always feel so sorry for Kent...but things work out for him, so it's okay. He's one of my faves too, although I don't usually use him in the actual game...

Anyway, very nice fic! (I liked "Sain's Guide to Dating" as well, but I read both of these together, so think of this as a review for both _)

lolz!

:D

Wow! I loved the sequel as well. Awesome stuff you've written. I have to read more...(scuttles off happily)

You should start another one of these!

HORAAY! Another installment! I'm so excited! Canas is one of my favorite characters! Get to work! Keep up the good work!