Reviews for Shine
P33pz chapter 7 . 10/23/2017
Oh my, that was steamy
This was a great story, I really liked it
MoonFlowerEclipse chapter 7 . 1/8/2016
I really loved this fanfiction, and I thought it was great!
Kat Fisch chapter 7 . 8/8/2013
I do believe that was the best thing I have ever read. Pretty sure I myself got busy with alucard in my dreams. This was so perfect :3
Don't second guess yourself about lemons. It was beautifully written. (Although, I do notice your avoidance of the word "breast. Don't be afraid to use it. I read plenty of adult manga and I find it more appealing than "boobs" or "tits". Those names just seem like they have negative connotation. But that's just me x3 )
Also, feel free to email me at
•w• a fan
Anon chapter 3 . 8/8/2013
Believe me
, more people are reading it than you think. This is probably one of my favorite fan fics I've ever read. Please keep writing them c;
You portray the characters well in my opinion
Serenpuppy16 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
wow, all I can say is wow. this story was amazing and I loved how it went by the episodes. one of the best AlucardxSeras fanfics i have read yet.
Konoha's White Fang chapter 7 . 9/25/2009
Awesome job! This was a very well-written fic and I'm so happy to say that I enjoyed every word of every chapter in it. I'm so happy really *staring at the sky with dreamy eyes* This story gave me the joy I needed for my day.

~KWF~
LilacHoneySunshine chapter 7 . 4/30/2009
So, I totally LOVE this story! You are a very good writer and now I'm sad that i finished reading it. It's so good though that I couldn't stop myself. And the romance part between Alucard and Seras, SPOT ON, it was great! And I would LOVE a sequel to this!
329329 chapter 7 . 3/13/2009
charming, lovely and sweet...

plz update soon...
Dizzy chapter 7 . 7/22/2008
A bit late to still revieuw this but I Just loved ot too much not to do so.. It was cute, funny, exciting and sexy, everything a story needs. And it has my favorite pair! Wooh!
Sammich Man chapter 6 . 5/26/2008
I like this, it's a whole analysis on Seras' and Alucard's relationship in the anime. Since it seems more probable in the anime than the manga version. Much more probable. I liked your added scenes as well.
secondbutton chapter 7 . 3/3/2008
Ahh. I really enjoyed this. One of the best AS fics I've read in a while. There doesn't seem to be much of these. Pity, really.

I liked the characterizations. I never really had any complaints about how you portrayed any of the characters. I loved the occasional humor you threw in. The emotions and conflicts within Seras were good too.

The lemon was considerably good. Alucard is just too damn sexy for his own good, isn't he? Black silk boxers... Yum.

This is from 2004 and I'm reviewing four years later. I'm really hoping I'll find a sequel to this once I take a glance at your author's page.

Well done.
Ozze Osb0urne chapter 7 . 11/5/2007
I rawked out to this fic! One of the best Alucard/Seras I've ever read. ROCK ON! You can't ever find a good Alucard/Seras romance, but I've found one and I loved it, man!

RAWK ON.

~Ozzie
Sea-EnigmaDare chapter 7 . 1/29/2007
Not bad and kinda does follow the anime,

minus the part where Alucard got jealous.

Quite enjoyable :)

nice job
SoulessKitten chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
Arnith87 chapter 7 . 6/23/2006
Great show on this story! I loved it!
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