Reviews for Abandon |
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himurasaki16 chapter 46 . 7/24 i understand you i abandoned my previous account and create a new one just for reading. |
SlytherpuffGryffinclaw chapter 12 . 6/10 Bombshell... |
SlytherpuffGryffinclaw chapter 6 . 6/10 'You out-Malfoyed a Malfoy?' Best quote ever |
TheBlueMoonRose chapter 6 . 4/5 i really wish you but more action down... i can't tell who's talking half the time... |
Eagle-Eyes chapter 48 . 3/14 Great story |
Serpent91 chapter 48 . 2/22 Well written! |
Silverfox579 chapter 4 . 2/20 Hm...Voldemort is so OOC...but it's not bad. I like it. |
D10g3n3s chapter 4 . 1/25 interesting story, but too fast paced. Tom killed Harry's parents and is terrorizing the world. there should be a LOT more buildup to them meeting up and talking so familiarly. this is a relationship that, realistically, would probably take the rest of the summer to get to this point. plus, isn't harry worried about Hedwig? his family could kill her, or let her starve to dearth in her cage. plus the rest of his belongings are still back there. plus you could add more details on setting. so in summary, interesting story, but needs more work. |
Severus-Loki-Sirius-Firestar chapter 48 . 1/1 Awesome story can't wait to read its sequel. |
Eliot Stein chapter 33 . 10/8/2019 He literally just said the password of someone else's room in parceltongue, implying that the owner speaks it as well. C'mon Parvati XD |
Guest chapter 13 . 8/24/2019 scary but cool! |
Guest chapter 12 . 8/24/2019 cute! |
Guest chapter 7 . 8/24/2019 funny! |
Guest chapter 5 . 8/24/2019 now he is good finally! |
silver.blast96 chapter 46 . 8/7/2019 Waaaaa go cry yourself a fuck’n river you loser. When you start something, you finish it! |