Loved it

lol

i love sakon and ukon! i love it when tayuya plys her flute!

My vote goes to Kimimaru and Tayuya(always found her hot).

Wha-? Dude, if the base was underground and they're now on the ground it would be warmer, because cold air sinks and hot air rises, I should know, I've been in a carve on a hot summer day and had to wear a full on sweater and even THEN it was like winter down there.

Um, obaa-san is grandma or old woman, oji-San is grandpa or old man.

Um, I've been wondering this for a while and when I put the small facts together it doesn't make sense, so how old is shizuka? The reason this doesn't make sense to me is simple though, in this chapter from the flashback it is reavealed that sakkon and shizuka have a 5 year age difference and since this is around the time of the sasuke mission it says online that he is 14 at this time, so going by the 5 year age difference shizuka should be 9, right? Well this would work if not for the fact that in the flashback from chapter two kabuto said that she was 12 and had her hormones going. Since that was the past though it wouldn't make sense that she is now 9 in the present, now would it, so how old is she? And you might wanna go back and fix that mistake.

It's very interesting how shizuka views everything such as the kimimaru 'pet' thing and I forgot to mention it before, but I absolutely LOVE the fact that she calls kabuto ma, when I first read it I had to do a double take and just about laughed my ass off, btw I have seen quite a bit of humor here, which is good in cases so far, but I really hope it doesn't take up this whole fix making it one that disregards the characters lethal, dangerous, skilled nature and makes joke out of them without having the retaliate in a more in character manner, I just noticed possible hints toward this such as when kabuki forgot to feed kimimaru, anyway still lovin' the fix so far, can't wait to see if she meets any of our beloved konoha ninjas.

I think I like everyone enough, except for tayuya. Also really like the fix, I wasn't so sure at first, but now I'm really getting into the idea of orochimaru's daughter.

that was so adorible

I like this. It's a strong beginning, and seems in character.

OH MY FREAKING IN HEAVEN GOD IN HELL! I havent laughed so hard in my LIFE! I almost had an asthma attack of laughter! And the best part was that i could actually see it happening!

BRAVO!

Youko-chan

I don't think I've ever laughed this much. I nearly fell out of my chair laughing at Sasuke's interview about the donut. Too funny. So now I do believe I'll go read all the other fics you've written. (I was planning on it before, but now, I'm determined to finish them all quickly. I would really love to have the chapters of the fics you took down, if you wouldn't mind.

omg i almost freeking peed my pants on the beggin of this chapter that was funny! great job!

i love you so much

this story rocks

i loved it to much

the last chapter is very funny

this is going into my favorite story list