Teehee. My favorite Maroon 5 song. This was very well-written, I love Nami and Jack so much, and you portrayed Nami's personality perfectly. Great job.

NICE! you fit the song right into the fic.

An excellent one shot. you captured the progression of character, so eloquently in Nami's on introspectivity. I do love the catalysm of the moment, and the twist her own thoughts take.

Well done.

...so sad... poor nami! XD she's my favorite! aww your story was so nice, short and sweet.. twas my first Harvest Moon fic...great job. -

Wow, that was really good. Nice description of characters, especially Jack. My only regret is that this is one-shot. Prehaps you will add more chapters someday?

Oh, very well written~ Also nice use of lyrics, not too much, just enough so they added to it.

aww that's so swet! I really love it! AWESOME! totally awesome!

Wow! This was an awesome fan-fic, even if it was one-shot! Keep up the awesome work!

I'll look for more stuff by ya'. This was really really good. And I'd say more only I am an unimaginative freak and can't think of anything else. -_-heh

Aw! Tragic!

This is really good and in the end it brought tears to my eyes. It is beautifully well written and you're right, the song fits perfectly. I hope you continue writing and on the right side, HMAWLFG is already out in Japan.

Wow man. You've got skills. :) Good job!

Wow, wonderful story. You've got a great style of writing that's enjoyable and easy to read. I'm looking forward to reading more by you!