Perfectly pitched.

I understand the prose...but yet I'm not. Does it make sense? :/ But I love it - even though I don't really understand why I love it. Definitely one of my faves. You did a very very great job, author-san.

Your writing style is so lovely :) I felt like I was in a trance as the words flowed through me, enchanting me with their elegance and simple beauty. But anyways...Gahhhhhh! This story is so subtle and amazing! I loved how you conveyed emotions through each thought and action - it was truly a beauty to read :D And I love love love how all the abstract (well, at least to me, lol) scientific writing at the beginning ended up to be a sugar transmutation in the end!

This was very well written and just too cute!

Aww, cute. I loved the bits with the sugar, I could never write something as awesome as that.

Though I did almost fail Chemestry, so.. XD

No, no, no.

It's not too subtle. The Roy/Riza relationship in itself is subtle. You did very well.

You captured the spirit- though this is a cliche.

I'll rereading this, maybe even adding it to my favorites.

aw ! i really loved the story .. it is very subtle but its just fit their real relationship , their are in fact very subtle ...thakns for the cute story !

subtleness thorough writing and descriptions good fic.

I watched too little of FMA to judge how much they're IC or not (most of my knowledge comes from fanfiction, 'cuz here in Italy the series has jast begun being aired ). Either way, it works well and suits the characters.

Another good piece, Nisei-san. and another fav _

Thursdays are the best days of the week. In my opinion. Anyway, this was a very well written piece. One of the few fics that portrays Roy and Riza's relationship as delicate and subtle. Left me with an thereal, soft feeling...nicely done.

I love it! Where has this fic been hiding after all my searches through the Roy/Riza stuff?

The details and descriptions were wonderful. This was such a joy to read.

I am going out to hunt down more stuff like this. :)

Yeah, Thursdays are good. I like the part at the beginning with Roy thinking about alchemy.

Very nice! _ I love your attention to detail in this. I liked how you brought about details of alchemy at the beginning of the story and the atmospheric detail on Riza's walk and just her routine and why she does it. _ Very nice!

Oh. You're so descriptive (I'm an English major, so I love it). And I think you blend the science and romance of it extremely well. It doesn't seem like Roy and Riza would do anything ostentatious about thier relationship anyway; both of them are kind of minimalistic (at least in my opinion) and I think this shows that rather nicely. I can see them doing this in the series, too, which is nice. Oh, just so good.

...Wow.

No, no, I think you capture the spirit of their relationship beautifully. Subtlety is good when its done well - and this is! This writing style just seems to work well with this fandom and especially with these characters.

Your detail is amazing. I wish I could write like that - I swear I could almost see what you were describing.

This also contains the best practical alchemy/array description I have run across. As a science-y person who once *tried* to make this stuff up, I am very impressed.

- We need more writers like you!

Subtle's good. The unspoken feelings are often more moving than words out loud. All these little rituals seem almost magical, and the mix of science in the beginning only makes it all the more entrancing. Nice! :)