amazing work, loved it !
hope to read more incredible work by you!

I saw the summary and just automatically went "0_0" It sounds kind of random, but this is actually a really good beginning!

That man is evil isn't he? Is he Ganondorf? Why does her father do this?! Does he not know how to say no?!

Wow, terribly sexist of you. First the king would rather have a son (that one I could understand as you might have depicted Hyrule as a patriarchal country). But she picked a mare? So, because a mare is female, it has to autimatically be smaller and slower than a stallion or gelding? Obviously, you know very little about horses. Mares have been used as warhorses, chargers, and more recently race horses. That's really stupid of you.

Very interesting. I like ganondorf in this, I like how you gave him a certain..uncleaness. Good sensorary detail too. Very good.

Aw, that was amazing! I suddenly got obsessed with this and couldn't stop reading it - bravo! I loved it xD

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I love this so far! I couldn't help but laugh at the part, "Zelda Dragmire. What a horrible name. What a wonderful thing it would have been if his child were a boy." xD The suspense of these chapters are really capturing me, along with your other stories!

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A truely fantastic story. I could go on, but seeing how this was posted four years ago, I doubt my review would mean much. Again this was a very well written and gripping story. Congratulations!

The Shadowy Anonymous Reviewer,

Mitch

nice work. very nice work. i must admit, i quite like badass Gerudo Zelda. she should show up more often in stories. excellent story all around!

~Faye

Zomg! I guess I'm a little late on the review but still I had to drop by and say this is one of the best god damn fics I've read in a while!

Terribly sorry for not reading in so long, or reviewing for that matter. I've had SO many other things occupying me, like four stories (trying to get an almost dead one up and running again and starting ANTOHER one with two others in progress!). -sighs tiredly- This was an absolutely wonderful ending and I hope that you do something with the wedding. I bet, if you do anything with it, you're gonna have Link come back with a 'bang' aren't you, AREN'T YOU? XD -laughs-

Alright.

Putting it bluntly, I read the summary while I was browsing, and I felt that it seemed like such an interesting plot that I had to read it.

It was, for the the most part, interesting. The whole thing is in a sort of...spontaneously continues. I feel as if the whole thing is rushed, and now quite detailed enough.

But okay. It was realy good, just thought it could have been better.

-darK

Wow! Somehow I hadn't been notified of the updates, but now I am glad that I looked it up!

You did a wonderful job with this story, and I am thouroughly impressed. The way you write is near-professional, with clever metaphors carefully placed in each passage. This was a great story to follow, and I am very glad that it ended happily.

I will definitely check out your other stories as well, and I look forward to anything else you may write in the future. Keep up the good work. :)

Sage

Fantastic ending! I could feel every single emotion you wrote! I really loved this story; you are a fantastic author and I look forward to anything you do in the future! Once again, brilliant work!

O_O WOW! Such a beautiful fic! I've read this since the beginning but never had a penname until now. The first chapter gripped me and I immediately fell in love with this story. Now it's over...and such a happy ending! I thought it would be longer, actually. But good job! This fic is the greatest! You deserve some sort of prize, seriously. _

~Koholint