Intriguing story! Thanks for sharing it with us.

This is a creepy, surreal chapter. It doesn't seem to start anywhere or go anywhere, and I would be tempted to call it filler if it weren't a vivid presentation of what seems to be trauma-induced delirium.

Got to see where this story is going!

I think this story could've gotten WAY more views if there were warnings of Mary Sue...oops I mean Gary Stu since Harry's a male in it as those who don't mind it would find this story funny.

Those who DO mind it would know that continuing thru there/here wouldn't be any improvement and not frustrate themselves into a tizzy.

This is my last review since I know this story is from 2004 and chances are we will see Obama actually get in trouble for his scandals and the CNN monopoly being busted up then actually any reviews here being seen.

Agenda 21 at it's best!

He's not dead just *sort of* dead. :) Then there is REALLY dead.

Look up Kerravonsen at which explains the life and lies of Albus Dumbledore and if he is manipulative or not. Gives a clear inside view from the Marauders era to the end of the series trying to give multiple possible answers to why Dumbledore did weird things.

He would say one thing but then do another much like a certain President that has been in office for 8 years while people under both of them either actively covered it up or remained silent or silenced others..

What gets me the most is no sane person would leave a baby on a doorstep unless it was common in the kings and queens era as a baby could wander off especially at Harry's age he was old enough he could crawl off into the wild.

And like the site said WHAT WAS Mcgonagall doing at the address when Dumbledore neither expected nor required her presence once and how would she know that would be Harry would go since she didn't have Dumbledore with her?

Why does Hagrid have Harry's key? It should be Harry's responseability.

Pffffft. There are other ways Harry could've killed them more quietly and effectively and nobody would be any the wiser.

I hate Pro Dumbledore/Gryffindor fics that are biased. I know you want to stick to canon but canon itself is the problem which is why a lot of fanfic authors branch out using *artistic license* to showcase the houses and how traditions work.

An interesting fanfic that sadly didn't go anywhere but had good promise is *They Shook Hands On It* about a different more diplomatic approach to Draco Malfoy.

This is rather Gary Stuish but I'll give it a pass because it's not as glaring as other fics I've seen.

Harry shouldn't have dropped that mirror! Seven years of bad luck! Uh Oh!

I wonder if anybody realizes how old this fic is? snicker snicker.

All that and just NOW we are finally leaving that bus? Who would've thunk that a short bus ride could be stretched so long?

Nope! Not reading your disjointed hallucination chapter. And since Ch.3 fails to immediately pick up the plot thread dropped in Ch.1, I refuse to read any more of this story. I'd rather stab my eyes out with dirty syringes before reading song, poetry, or symbolic BS written by a HP fanfic author.

Maybe if I'd devoted more than 5 minutes to this fic, I could be bothered to skim ahead to where you finally pick up the plot. But I don't have that kind of an emotional attachment to your story, so this ends here. Goodbye.

I'm sorry. I KNOW you're a good writer, and a good friend. But this specific story is playing merry hell with my ADHD. So I'm not going to finish it.

not a bad story. thanks for sharing it.

Somebody's read "Spock's World"... *grin*

Very good chapter, terribly well-written, and made me realize that i need to go back and reacquaint myself with the beginning of this story, because, break in continuity.
Still
Rock on

Bloody hell! That chapter really took it out of me. I bet it took it outta you as well. But that comeuppance was surely overdue for those Death Munching gits. thanx for giving it to them.
Rock on