After all the crap Hotsuma has been through, if you kill him, I will make you feel pain. - On a lighter note, solid chapter. The only thing you need to work on is layout. Of course, has f*ed up the story editor so much I can't really blame you for a bad layout and paragraph issues. That's partially why I quit writing. o.o Anyway. Yeah. Don't kill Hotsu.

HOLY JIHAD HOW DID I GET SO FAR BEHIND? Eh...well...I'm sorry I'm reviewing this chapter like a year after everyone else did...Things have been hectic, what with my old computer dying.

It's good to see a sequel. And I can see the second chapter is better than the first. -

You have a good idea, man. Once again, if you work hard enough, you could make this fic so good IT MAKES MY EYES BLEED FROM THE SHEER FORCE OF THE AWESOMENESS.

Peace out.

Haha, it looks like Harry(SANKO) just barely met Namiko and now he's already imagine her naked.

Well I can tell becuz you wrote this:

Sanko stared at her for a moment. He tried to imagine Namiko's sleek slender body wearing a thong. He then imagined her wearing nothing at all and started to look at her curiously. He stared at her for another moment and tried to imagine her touching him in a very naughty way.

Haha u r so perverted Soul! Or maybe I'm just having inappropriate thoughts about Namiko, hm. Nah, anyways I might not review this alot since I think this fic is dead bit itz your story.

BTW It's 10:30 on a school nite and I still haven't gone to bed. Oh and just in case you're wondering I've been qouting you in my recent reviews because it's alot of fun. I know you were going to point that out sooner or later. Well See ya!

Roy! OMFG Roy! You used my idea! You put Harry Potter in there! I salute you! Oh so, um... is Hermione goin' to be in there? Unless you're going to pair off Harry and Namiko... uh, scary.

Yarr. It'd better get better. -shakes fist- Next chapter is longer. Don't say 'it sucks next will be better'. Well, by now you know what I expect. '