Love

Awe :) how cute :)

that was so cute!

awwwww that was so cute! love the story idea.

i love james.
' think weddings not funerals '
he's dedicated and sweet

... awful shock for him though,.. to find Lily so unwilling

Wow plot twist

At first when he said Sirius I almost had a heart attack
When Ben asked her out I wanted to kill you (no offence)
When she kissed Ben I wanted to scream
When James forgave her so easily I thought whether is that what love feels like
When I read Ben's letter I felt immensely sad
When read the ending I couldn't help having a big goofy grin on my face
Ur story is gr8 and now I am lazy continue writing u may become famous one day and when u do plz mention my name thx
Keep on writing and I should stop writing
Bye!

I thought they were together for 3 years, since James was 21 when they met. Or do you mean two years since they've been properly dating? Love your story!

HOW THE FUCK DID LILY KEEP HER TEMPER? I would have walked in late to dinner and pretend to have forgotten so my mum and dad can't yell at me.

Omg, I almost had a heart attack when he said his name was Sirius. I was like "HUH? ISN'T THIS A LILY AND JAMES STORY?! DID I GET IT WRONG? ARGH!" The age gap surprises me a bit too.

This is great, but extremely ooc

Beautiful! Lovely! Imagine all the compliments in the world, I'm giving them to you

well this plot and characterization was completely unexpected to me!

Lily being rebellious, the whole work of Mr. Potter, the relations of the Mauraders.. Petunia.. etc.!

Kept me reading and loving the whole thing for sure! Though, everything was very unexpected to me.

Thanks for writing! Nice work.

This is amazingly perfect. It only makes what happens next even more devastating! AHH! 3 it

Wow, I just read your story from start to finish tonight and I LOVED it! Thank you for posting it!