hey, it was a very interesting and well written story
I like how you wrote the friendship of Sirius and Hermione
and hermione’s changes and vision. It is very good and creative
thanks for sharing

this lonely and lost sirius cuts my heart
Amazing job

hey, that was very interesting
I don't like dumbledore, but he is very interesting in his story, so I can bear he

and the vision! omg, that was unexpected and curious and omg
I'm curious

and draco, lmao. that was fun. I wanted to punch the git in the draco's face. but you write it very well the personality. looks like the annoying draco

very good, thanks for sharing

damn malfoy. ugh. the son of a bitch

hermione’s memories are interesting
and sirius reaching the high notes is fun
I'm very curious about this story
and I'm in doubt if harry remembers anything, he did some cryptic conversations after all

Amazing and interesting

hermione and the twins it was fun, i love it

hermione's older consciousness returned to the body? I am excited
i like the interaction of sirius and hermione. remus is cute and kind

I love the way you write, it's exciting, intriguing, fun
the little comments about hermione make me smile
and I'm loving this story, it's a different storyline and I love it
you portrayed this sirius and hermione well

hey, I read the synopsis and I'm deeply curious

WRITE THE SEQUEL! Please! I beg of you! Just start writing and it'll come to you!

Update please

thi's well written story imo! so good!

“I didn’t know it needed repairs. it’s a map!”

Not only do I love your story, I love the quotes at the beginning of each chapter!