I've been rereading this story ever since you first began it, most of what I wanted to say has already been said by the commenter below me but in all honesty this isn't a story you should discontinue. It's amazingly thought out and it leads you along with their emotions. While I'm glad I can still keep coming to rereading it, I would love it even more if I wouldn't have to wonder what will happen next. :c

Wow. Even though it's discontinued, I'm glad it didn't end in a cliffhanger. It truly does feel like the end. An end with a few loose ends you might wanna tie up, per say Squalls family crest?

Anyways. Tis a shame really. I have read a lot of good squiffies, but this one... the way you portrayed the emotions. The reality of how they would act in a more real life situation. I envy you. I wish I could create something of this magnitude. It was just perfect.

If ever given a small bit of inspiration, would you mind giving this story a more proper end? It's just to wonderful a story to just say DISCONTINUED.

Just one more chapter. Just one to tie all the loose ends is all I ask. I know i'm ranting, but as a fellow author, I feel particularly strong feelings about this fic. It doesn't deserve to be stuck in inprogress.

Give my review some thought please. I'm willing to share ideas if you want to chat sometime.

~The Little Catgirl

OMGOMGOMGOMG!

THIS. IS. AMAZING!

I love it, this is an awesome story! Original plot, lots of insight, VERY well written, and I do believe I've found my all-time favorite story. Please update soon! 3

Hahah. Don't you love friends who won't leave you alone? Great job!

I love this story! Its amazing! PLEASE CONTINUE!

Pweeze? :(

Love, WolfFlowerz x

I really like this story. It's very sweet. I remember reading it three years ago. You'll probably never continue this story, but it was very good while it lasted. 19 chapters of yay. Squiffies are the best. Also, I love the relationship you made between Cloud and Yuffie. I can totally picture them acting like that.

see, this is why i should read whole sentences.

thanks for clearing that up with me.

this is a really good fic, i like the idea. it's been used, but yours is more creative.

in chapter one, you said that yuffie's mother died of an illness. other than that, this is a really good story so far. i like the way you captured yuffie.

Ok, I sat there contimplating at 3:00 AM wondering how much I liked your story,

and petting my cat in y lap who was begging for my attention (wich I found extremly Ironic)

now it's 4:00 AM, I just finished reading it, and decided it was awesome D

But if I fall asleep in class today, I am blaming you and your squiffie!

I am indubidebly tired, and I must wander off to sleep.

(sadly with no leon chest behind me [)

~Numa

I like the sky is falling but i dont see pigs flying thing from riku and sora...

It makes me sad that you discontinue this story ...or all of your stories for that matter (I'm going to read the finished one like...now 3 ) I would really have loved to read more of this but I guess I can't force you into writing again ...anyway...You're really talented at writing and you captured the personalities of all the characters very good...or well? Oo except for Cloud maybe...and it's better when he's not all emo

sincerely yours, cei (

Ano... I know this is random though... If you've ran out of ideas (seeing if I recall correctly, you lost your inspiration) you could have the father coming back in Yuffie's life... -'

Aweomse story, I really liked it, a lot! Keep it up becuase I love your writing!

Great job, I can't wait to read more!

This was a realy great start and I absolutely cannot wait to read more! Keep it up and I'm adding this story to faves!