re-reading this fic again.. n wondering on when is it going to be updated.. he is definitely going to pissed once everything is explained to him by the borgias.. his family bout the guardians n all.. n etc..

Nice story but you made some mistakes. James Potter's parents are Charlus Potter and Dorea Potter nee Black. Lucretia Black was actually married to Ignatius Prewett, Molly Weasely's grandfather. Ted Tonks is a Muggle born wizard, not a muggle.

And I'm done. Harry fell in love with Bellatrix after like a 5 minute conversation. So nonsensical..

Oh my.. Harry is pretty liberal with his information isn't he? Just blurts out important information and shares his past with everyone. Makes it hard to read because the characters all sound stupid. Other then that you have quite a few spelling, grammar and punctuation errors.

I like the family story and all the powerfull Harry.. But i want more Bella/Harry growing relationship.. They deserve more.. Please come back and update this awesome story..

Borgias everywhere...

Necromancer and very powerfull.. Those Borgia are a thing no? Harry is family to them but to Potters and Slytherin and Gryffindor?

He almost die.. But what is happening? Why he jump to be dead so crazily? Im confussed.. And poor Bella seeing his fiance like that..

They are so romantic and sweet.. Bellatrix is the cutest and prim/proper young woman.. I just love it.. Harry need to work hard for make her happy and very far from evil side..

Mcgonagal and Harry are going to have some type of relationship? He say he does not going to be faithful to Bellatrix until marriage.. I just think..

They talk for floo as if was a cellphone! What the hell? Detention with those four little prankers of course he need to put some sense on his brains..

Ollivander is for sure a very enigmatic men.. But a very smart one thats for sure..

Oh those little brats are in trouble now! Marauders o no, Harry newd to think a very crear way to revenge himself..

That was so risk.. Voldemort can kill him without mercy.. Harry is a little crazy. Marcello Borgia look more like the main character than Bella.. Why?

The Borgias? Whay a twist in the story.. I love it..