...Poor clock We will miss you. Rest In Peace. Amen. ,00 ,_ 8'(

T_T ... How did Sasuke not notice that before?

0.0 IS SHUKAKU GOANNA MAKE GAARA KILL NARUTO?

godaime! I hate it when that happens the writer leaves everyone IC (what is a very hard thing to do congrats on that one)what makes it end in total desaster, I have a major case of mixed emotions wright now, I'm angry sad and have an overall feeling of hopelessness ok, I'm done with my I-need-to-speak-my-mind-or-die comment and am off to read a total ooc humor fic to get my mind out of the gutters.:D

good story i REALLY enjoy it ] and ur like.. character r like soo THEM... IF U GET WHAT I MEAN i mena most stories have OCC and u doin't ] which was great xD thansk u for makign the story but i srsly dun get the end.. .. srsly so what happens/?

aw... well, this certainly didn't turn out at all like I'd hoped - or expected. It's still a good story... no, a great story. But now I'm probably gonna cry for hours cuz Naruto doesn't have Sasuke OR Gaara, and Gaara didn't ACTUALLY get to see what love is. And now I'm uber mad at Sasuke for being such a damned prick, and then there's the... *continues ranting for hours and hours*

Akari: *Twitch* God, and I have to live with her. Oh well. Anyway, this was a good story and I'm sure she'll be coming back to reread it every once in a while.

really nice story... i really loved it... though i didn't get the ending were gaara said "No Great Less"

*SPOILER ALERT! DO NOT READ (UNLESS UR THE AUTHORESS, LOL DUH)*

OKAY, THAT STORY WAS GREAT! I dunno what's up with all the flamin...

anyway, the ending. it left me wanting more, but that's what all great writers do!

and all the idiots who that ruined the story or somethin need to think straight...

everything was very brutal, but so in character! one of the problems I typically have is y isn't sasuke twisting things? and then, you made it so he did.

and gaara... WOW. I like how you madeit so only sasuke and gaara saw the difference... and ended up killing each other...

how ironic. I was kind of hoping that only naruto woul die and then you know, sasuke and gaara realize they're wrong and yadda yadda yadda, or all three die... but the way you had it... *shivers*

omg and sasuke sees naruto open his eyes! if he didn't, we wouldve had a great fluff scene, but... wow.

okay, I'm gonna shut up now and vaguely hope nobody reads this with all the spoilers... lol, this has gotten kinda long... *slaps herself* srry!

Uh, this was a very good story and all, but so Gaara simply gives up on Naruto, Sasuke is dead and mutilated, and Naruto dies. Yeah, please write a prologue. Cause the ending leaves much to be desired. Like a nicer ending. Cause I just can't see this as the ending for this story.

*is crying*

*will read more (if you write more) as soon as she gets a new heart for you to rip out and slash to pieces once again*

*cries more*

XD. that was an interesting chapter. I really hope naruto ends up with gaara _

wow. Awsome story.

*got left hanging* whaa? okay so sasuke died. naruto joined him? and gaara went gaga? cool story though. did you get your titles from songs?

That was the stupidest story I have ever read. The amnesia plot was interesting, but it was rather rushed...and the drama was so anti-climatic. You have no writing skills and you characters are not up to par. You should be ashamed oh writing a story this bad. Disgracing authors that actually make an effort...*gag.* Do us a favor, and stop writing.

*dies* I-I-I...*slaps herself* Okay. Back to normal. As normal as I'll ever get, anyways.

What can I really say now? Since I've been someone who has continued to read the fic since its early chapters, I have seen a total transformation in the last two...two? years. The ending was beautifully written, as fics now-a-days should be written (not like the crap Jia has abandoned reading). There is a definate liquidic flow to your words, and a deep anguish in your characters development.

The only "quirk" I have with "All Falls Down" is that ending. It left it-"blank", and wasn't as wrapped up as nicely as I expected it to be. It just ended like... "CUT!" end. That of thing, do you know what I mean? Well, anyways, the ending was a little disappointing, since I had been kinda expect this great anti-climatic, almost horrific and deeply depressing ending, to be organized with shock and a grotesque beauty. Got the beauty, lacked the shock. But oh well! It turned out a very well written story, and one of the best examples of "bettered writing style over time" I have seen. A great feat of accomplishment Tsuki-san!

At leas, it's over ne? ; (Well, for you, not for me, 'cause I got so much more left to write my brains out...)