Yay they get to explore now! :) "MAITIMO STOP MAKING OUT WITH YOUR HALF-COUSIN AND WATCH YOUR BROTHERS!"

Cute, very amusing, just perfect. Sorry, can't add much to other reviews, but I read this with a silly grin on my face all the way through. I adore the last sentence.

Just gorgeous. Maedhros isn't the only one shivering by the end. I don't completely understand it - why ten years? why did Maedhros set a condition? but I don't care, and not understanding everything just makes it more powerful.

Just a bravissimo! this is a wonderful story! How erotic without words, only a fire in the air. Thank you for sharing this!

We! cute! Xd

Sorry for being so late reviewing this - my travels, don't you know! ;)

But wow, Nol. WOW. I can't actually express how wonderful this was. The inter-character relationships made me just quiver. It's so beautifully written and the way Maitimo and Findekáno's conversation became progressively more incoherent was very well portrayed. Awe, man, awe. *love*

I like the intelligence and the naivete of the twins, even though I'm not a slash fan.

I loved it. And I smiled all the time as I read it. :) 'Anairo' just caught on, I suppose. The incomprehensibility had sense to it, the naivete of Ambarussa had an uncanny wisdom. The pacing was brilliant. Lovely story, Nol.

The best Fingon/Maedhros story I have read in a long, long, long while.

*melts* It seems like such a fairy tale, with the setting, desciption, dialogue, all of it. Fingon is the heroic returning Prince Charming to Maedhros' Sleeping Beauty-in-exile. Or something like that . .

Wonderful, superbly put down to the very last word. I love this story so much. I think it's my favorite.

This is adorable - the twins are as cute and precocious as you would expect small elves to be and Nelya and Findekano are as heedless of their audience as you would expect young lovers to be. (I can't help but imagine the twins putting Nelya in a very uncomfortable position at the dinner table with their questions and impressions of the day!)

Very, very cute. The twins are perfect as confused spectators, and the way they speak is so funny. The romance and the humour work very well together. It's a lovely story.

Aw, that's so CUTE! I love the Chibi-twins. And I love Maedhros, too. But what was ten years ago that day? I wanna know!