It was a good story. It was also unexpected. I expected a story like many of the other stories with Harry defeating Voldemort, being hailed as a hero, etc. We got something different, and still entertaining. Thanks for the ride.

Fun story, but all the spelling errors cause temporary confusion and stop me in my tracks while I try to figure out what you mean.

Hermione was great! She deserves 1st class.

Great dramatic writing for this battle scene! Thank you.

original idea!

The jokes in this story provided great comic relief! I also thought the dementor storyline was original. Well done!

thank you for the last line i could hear yuya saying it in his sebastian michaelis voice

love this one

Nice story. I discovered this today and it was a pleasure to spend sn afternoon reading

okay why is snape still mean to griffindors voldys dead he is no longer a spy

Enjoyed reading the story! Bye

It 's well written and you're right about copying the attitude of canon snape... I could imagine that Queen Rowling would accept what you have written cause its so canonesque (lmao i dont even know if thats a real word)

I get that snape isn't use to being someone who students turn to talk to about their secrets but the man was a spy he is used to keeping secrets why would that change now that the war is over. I don't think he would've said something like without proper provocation. I would of liked to know more about why snape went back to being mean to them so I could understand his point of view instead of this out of no where.

"Let's just say I found something he didn't like and couldn't get rid of, and I did it for him."

Is it just me, or does that sound like Harry assassinated someone for Snape?

Wow, I love the ending! Great Snape/mentor story!