this is incredible!

Hey Megan,

I really wish you had continued this story :-) I have read the whole thing thus far and I want to know what else is gonna happen. You really are a great writer.

im sorry, but to be blunt, your story is terrible. WHY is HARRY suffereing oh so much and not FRODO? harry was perfcctly fine in the books, he dones not suddenly suffers horribly after coming here. and, if their loyalty is uncertain, WHY ARE THEY ON THE QUEST? also, YOU CANNOT SERIUSLY SAY REMUS WOULD LOSE TRACK OF THE FULL MOON. or is it that in all the excitement, he forgot?*sarcastic* and, werewolves do exist in the lotr world-they would not abandon 2 NEW people to this world alone on caradras. "they'll be fine" you wrote, but HOW ARE THEY GOING TO MEET UP WITH THE FELLOWSHIP? THEY DONT HAVE MAPS, THEY DONT KNOW WHERE THEIR GOING, THEY DONT KNOW WHERE MORIA IS, THEY DONT KNOW THE PASSWORD TO MORIA, AND THEY CANNOT TRACK LIKE ARAGORN OR LEGOLAS.

and then there's Jasmine. you wanted a "strong heroine" on the quest. ok fine. WHY IS SHE LEGOLAS'S SISTER! AND WHAT KIND OF ELVISH NAME IS JASMINE? IF YOU'RE GOING TO CREATE AN ELF CAHRACTER, PLEASE AT LEAST GIVE HER AN ELVISH SOUNDING NAME. AND WHY IS SHE DYING FROM A SHOULDER WOUND? IF SHE'S THAT INJURED, ARAGORN IS A HEALER! YOU COULD AT LEAST HAVE HIM LOOK AT HER! OR WHAT, DO THEY JUST AUTOMATICALLY ASSUME SHE'S POISONED AND THATS WHY SHES SO HURT?

AND ARAGORN DOES NOT NOT CARE ABOUT GANDALF-HE WOULD NOT BE EMOTIONLESS. ALSO, WHY IS IT THAT THE ONLY PEOPLE HARRY TRUST HARRY AND SAM? WHAT ABOUT PIPIN AND MERRY? HE DOESNT RRUST HIS BEST FRIENDS AND COUSINS ANYMORE NOW?

YOUR STROY IS SO DIGUSTING IT MAKES ME SICK AND TO KILL YOUR HARRY. IT WAS ACTUALLY OK IN THE BEGINING, BUT IT SERIOUSLY JUST GOT WORSE. and yes i acknowledge this a a flame, but thats just how horribel your story is. and normally i dont flame even if i dont like the story. well, you dont have to reply to this if you dont want to, but i just had to point out the major plotholes and things that bothered me alot in your story.

This is BRILLIANT! Keep Going! (Sirius ROCKS!)

This seems intriguing. Please update soon; I'm very curious to know what happens next.

please update son! and put some Harry useing magic int here, adn make sure they meet Treeberd!

Wow! It's so original what you are doing! Even if you did get the idea from someone else! I like how you kept people realistic. Keep up the good work!

I love how you wrote Remus, even if it is slightly different than what he would be in the books. Also I love how Sirius isn’t dead! (The fan-girl in me is very happy) ;) But what about Elizabeth? She needs Will!

Well anyway, I also liked how you were able to bring Voldemort and Barbossa into the plot, it makes it a lot more interesting! The humor is subtle, but even then it makes you laugh out loud. I really can’t say enough about how well you balance the humor with cannon, while giving it your own flair! I really enjoy reading this!

PS: To save_cannon, is it really necessary to flame someone just because you didn't like the story? Both Ob1MegOb1 and Wambachjr2 have very good stories. But if you didn't like them, wouldn't using constructive criticism be a lot more helpful, instead of attacking them personally? You have no idea about who they are. Not to mention you posted your review anonymously, so they wouldn’t be able to see your stories. As for Ob1MegOb1 not knowing cannon, the whole point of fan fiction is to take a story and put your own personal twist on it. It’s not the point of the story to know cannon. It’s to be original, which both these authors have done. As for a mindless teenybopper, how would you know? Just because Wambachjr2 isn’t a fan like you are doesn’t make her a mindless teenybopper. And how do you know what a ‘real fan of the fandom’ is? What you are? If you are going to flame someone, have the guts to do it with your real pen name. Wambachjr2 does have respect, the fact that she takes time to write a story using their characters shows just how much she respects them and their talent.

ah it was worth the wait!

loved that u brought in the actual lotr movie

and i love sirius, im sorry i just do!

more! (quicker?)

hehe

x

hullo AGAIN! I know your not doing the whole 'comment on each character thing but I thought HEY why the hell not so here I go...

Boromir:cool, and totally kickass, and so should not die, but he does *tear* *hugs boromir*/Aragorn: hot in a 'i'm very manly way' though hes like a big brother in your story/Frodo: The coolest hobbit EVER *glomps frodo*/Sam:...no comment/merry-pippin-anakin:absolutley adorable! *kisses their (face) cheeks)/ Jack: annoying but totally awesome *gives jack random banana*/ will and Legolas: SO GORGEOUS *fangirl sqeal than kisses both passionatly**than drags a screaming legolas into closet*/ gimli: MINI SANTA!/ obiwan: sexy in a 'I'm a virgin sort of way' (lol)/ Gandalf: coolest old guy ever though I think hes gay/ remus: dude what a buzz kill/ sirius: cool but NOT hot m'kay

So thats what I think, and yeah...PWMS (please write more soon) you rock man..girl...person...

hullo, dude love the story it totally kicks major arse monkey. PWMS!

OMG! I just LOVE this story!:) It has all my favorites characters:D From my favorites movies:D:P

Keep going the good work:):P:D Update?

Eep! Oh my GOD! So, uh, does anyone else get killed? Please update. This is such a good story.

OMG OMG OMGOD! I know the poll is off, but I vote Harry, Jack, and Darth Vader if he's in here. It's Anakin against himself! That...will...be...soo...AWESOME DUDES!1!one UPDATE DAMNIT! Or I will send Alli ze sh33p to killz you! *cough* I mean, pweese?

*glaring at computer* ok, now I am pissed off... I had this AMAZING review and my stupid computer deleted the whole flippin' thing! *kicks computer* YOUCH! *starts hopping on one foot, and runs into rolling chair* OW! *and falls to the ground* OOF! *with the chair falling on top* YAOW! * and falls down a flight of stairs-* AAHH! *conveintely placed by ...

*stops in mid fall* Wait a second... *jumps out of scene to glare at Jack, Pippin, Sirius and Harry* you...

the four: *gulp*

ARGH! *attacks them all, with such fervor and insanity that the rest stare dumbstruck at the brawl, or rather, ass-kicking.*

yeah... not my original review. I had eloquently describe the sideeffects some of your reviews submitted by me will ahve because they were being written by me. It all depends on a variety of reasons, and proceeded to warn you about not moving quickly for it draws my attentions and suffers from insanity and ADD and love of-

o, shiny...

*wanders off, leaving authoress, characters alone* the characters look over to the heap of their comrades (Harry, Jack, Sirius, Pippin).

The four: oow...

Ob1MegOb1: well, that's what you get for pissing off a reviewer.

Sirius: but we're characters of YOUR current story... aren't you supposed to protect us for harm so that we are able to star in your story?

Ob1MegOb1: *considers*

ME: Hey, the dark side has chocolate!

Ob1MegOb1: Nope. *frolicks off with Lulu belle in search of the chocolate the conquerers of the world have promised.*

Harry: we're screwed, aren't we?

Jack: So young, so brave and popular, and yet so incredibly stupid.

*eyes narrow to slits*

I have finals tomorrow. My back is killing me from ultimate frisbee. I am in one of those phases. There is NO CHOCOLATE IN MY HOUSE! *screaming now on the top of her lungs to cowering kidnappers*

NOW YOU BETTER FLIPPIN' HAND HER OVER BEFORE YOU FACE THE WRATH OF A CHOCOLATE-SLEEP DEPRIEVED TEENAGE GIRL TRYING TO PROCRASTINATE STUDYING FOR HER FINALS!

*they all scramble together to untie Ob1MegOb1, which is proving to be quite difficult because they are trembling so much and keep running into each otehr*