Im sad that its over but i liked who the ending bad guy was. That was a very good way to get Seras through her guilt too.

The story is amazing, in my opinion. I read without stopping. The relationship between Alucard and Seras is so well described that it felt as if it should have been. In this version, I liked how you described seras ' internal conflicts and emotions; I like how she reacts to the situation. Although the fanfic was written a long time ago, the story is still well received - no outpouring of pathos and cloying romance(if you can call it that). I would like to read the unedited version of the last Chapter, for I am very interested to know! Reading the first Chapter of the sequel, I just really want to read that cut piece. I will be very grateful if someone throws me a link to the author's blog, or that very piece last chapter. But I can't find, probably, the Internet has changed for a long time.
The author may not see my review, but I will write it anyway:
Thank you for writing all these stories about Seras and Alucard. Thanks to here is such interesting stories(where more shown relations, different options events, dynamics), I can even more love this OTP, and hope, that such interesting and good fanfic's on this OTP (Seras x Alukard) will appear more.
It doesn't exactly look like a review, but I tried. *laughter*

*Slow Clap*

There isn't nearly enough Seras and Alucard stories. Tears run down this unworthy face as I thank you. You are a gift from the heavens for bringing such good works.

Thank you for this amazing story.

Though Seras is a little Oc, but not enough to ruin it.

It's been a while since I've read this, and I'm enjoying it so far.

You could've written the adult scene on here, as long as you change your story to M for mature. Great story! Loved it! But just fyi, Alucard is the first vampire to ever exist. He was turned by making a deal with the devil and by drinking blood and some dark magic. He never had a master. That is one of the reasons he's considered a No-Life King. But it's also because no other vampire can match his strength.

Really a good piece of writing! I'd be grateful if someone can forward me to the uncensored passage though. Can't find it anywhere nor the homepage:(

Haha, such a funny scene of the mind-reading confrontation! Amused me a lot.

Great story.

The quotes at the beginning are really nice

I find it odd that you use Mina Harker as his old wife. I say this because anyone who has read Dracula will know that a vampire can only turn virgins into new vampires. Mina HARKER is married to Jonathan, Harker was not her maiden name, implying that the man who was trapped and toyed with by the count was a vampire himself. I am nitpicking of course but to save trouble you should have used Lucy, who was turned into a vampire by Dracula and simply say that she wasn't created by the count this would have made more sense. I think now that you might have gotten Mina and Lucy mixes up, as Lucy was the more beautiful of the two ans had blond hair. Sorry for the long post.

This was a truly beautiful story :)

Alucard and Seras make one hell of a team!

That son of a bitch! How dare he use Seras against Alucard like that! Maxwell better pray to God that Alucard doesn't breaks free of his hold over him because once he does there will be hell to pay! That's for damn sure.

Oh, no! *clasps hands over mouth* They got Seras! Those bastards better not lay a hand on her or else Alucard will destroy their sorry asses. *ponders that statement* Actually, he'll do that anyway just for kidnapping his darling servant.

O.o Wow! I mean, out of all the places they could have gotten freaky it had to be at a cemetery. *gives the both of them an incredulous look* Well, at least they didn't get it on inside a church. God, only knows what Anderson would do if he ever witnessed that in the afterlife. Lol :)