man oh man im so depressed now haha i was so into this story i was hooked your a really great writer i gotta say this story is real different then most,most just follow storyline of real event but you changed it all round even tho it not finished ill be adding it to my fav any ways thats how awesome it is, i hope one day you come back and finish this ive read alot storys i gotta say if you finished this it could prolly be one my fav storys outta of them all

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An excellent story. I'm sad to see in end, but at least now I know what will happen if Tidus leaves Yuna.

Wow! Alot of changes are being made. Yuna has more gaurdians! I love the relationship between Lulu and Auron. Lovely chapter!

I like this chapter. Tremath's past was a very painful one, even to lose a close friend. His attitude, persona changed instantly. Great job on this chapter!

I love the moment here with Yuna and Tidus, very emotional and suspenceful with an assassin lurking around them. Great chapter!

Such a great way to get away from the crucial mission. The festival scene was amazing! How flattering Yuna and Tidus dress to be. Great chapter!

Wow! This chapter is really action packed! I love how deep the secrets are and the introductions of new familiar characters. Great job!

Oh, such a sincere beginning. It was quiet emotional. I'm curious of what it to become of Tidus and Yuna. Wonderful job!

damn the story was so good! i was really enjoying it! D':

oh well! i love the way you write you are very talented! oh if only you could have saved the story! .. it's very creative

having the actual temples as the bad guys not just Seymour as i have seen in so many other fanfics i liked how you manged to get all the guardians to help Yuna on her journey. and that you have managed to make the characters do similar thing as in the story and keep them almost always in character except for Tidus but that was obvious though, he hadn't gone through the exact same thing as the Tidus from the actual game! and their roles or positions in your story fitted each character very well.

and i liked the way that you portrayed Sin the shadow like fiend with a coloured centre that was creepy because it had the feel of death and you could almost see all the souls he had taken away, like the fiend in Omega Ruins. It suited Sin's part in the story how he is not exactly destroying everything yet because he needs to be restored.. Another thing i really enjoyed was what Rikku says tha the Al Bhed believe in, that everyone has a purpose in life, something they are put on the planet to do, no matter how big or small! i greatly hope that you could revisit this story and see if you can find an ending in your mind that will fit this story well because honestly lived it so much.

and if i can say so again YOU ARE A FRIGGING TALENTED WRITER! i think that i will check out your other Final Fantasy stories, and see how much i enjoy them.

well hopefully you can find something that fits the ending of this wonderful story anything will do.. In my mind though i see this as an ending in the farplane with the rest of their families. I don't know why i just see it that way in my mind.

well one last time i will say this in this review YOU ARE SO DAMN TALENTED, I WISH YOU COULD FINISH THIS!

and believe me this is not the last time you will be hearing it from me!I find it odd that i could write a revie that can go for what seems like ever but i can never think up a story that lasts for longer than 1000 words.. well i'm going to check out the rest of your stories goodbye my new friend, Good luck with all the stories you write in the future, you will always have one person out ththat loves your stories, but that doesn't matter if you write for fun and enjoy it! i think that if you believe in yourself and you enjoy what you do, you can do it all! that was my biggest review ever i believe. and i could still keep going! but i will cut it short, because i think i might be boring you

well then, i will be going now.. enjoy writing and i will enjoy reading!

Love Evie xD

Clever trick in getting through and really lucky as well.. xD Neato!

Ahhh, nice chapter!

Good chapter~

Your story totally deserves the reviews.. So, here I am reviewing all the way like I said, ya.

*goes to read more*

Awshucks, cliffhanger!

I really like how the trust develops normally/slowly in realistic way not like love in first sight thingy or something like that.

I can't wait to read more~

Woahhhh, nice chapter!

It's really good to see the characters being true to themselves in the story.

Very cool original plot. :D

This kept me looking forward more to this story even it's discontinued, I'll try to review every chapter I read. :)

Gotta read more! :3