I LUV ur story. I think that you capture the star crossed lovers well. I especially liked the ending, when the parting is so sweet in its bitterness. If you ever red this, PLZ continue your story

really good keep writing!

oh come on? can't this one go on a little more? this is too captive to let alone. write more!

Elda _~

This is great finally a a/b fic that doesn't just re tell the movie! you should totally continue this I really want to see the reations to everyone.

please update

i loved it all and hated none of it and i do wish that u would update so i could read lots more

This was a good story and I hope you havent decided not to write anymore of it.

keep going...

Why did you stop writing this story?

It was so beautiful and sad all at once. I would have loved to know how you pland to let it go on.

Maybe you would reconsider writing it again.

Bye aCharmedOne

I love your storyy it rocks! I just watched the movie Troy yesterday and became hooked on the couple that is Achilles and Briesis. Ans like I said before go you! your story rules...looking foward to more chapters...(hopefully a certain someone won't die...)

update soon

please update soon! please! it's awsome!

great

Fabulous story. The dialogue was interesting as well as the descriptions of their emotions and body language. I wish you would write more.

I liked your story, honestly who wouldnt want to jump brad pitts bones! please write another chapter (maybe achillies shouldnt die)