i really love it so far but it is a bit quick and i think there could have been a bit more tension between h and d

OOC Hermione, but I couldn't care less, the story was great, and that's all that matters :)

AMAZINGGG.. .

I thought Hedwig was dead?
Love your story, keep doing what you love!

Ok. So I was enjoying the concept you had until this chapter. I was a bit confused about the group date purpose but actually liked what you did. Then, Draco changed so drastically from apologetic to “I can date as many girls as I want” and you lost me. I’m just not understanding Draco’s character in this story.

aww

Way to cute! I love the song selection.

I think the name should be “Dancing and dining dangerously”

HOLY SHIT IT THAT A LIONESS REFERENCE

I do love this story so far, but Hermione seems a bit OOC and I’m not sure I like this catty side of her

I read Ginny's lines in Mrs. Weasley's voice. I don't know why. ~

that chapter was confusing

It's Tibor and diz iz not a hungarian accent.

I feel as though it's very out of character for Hermione to be concerned with whether or not Marian Jenny sleep together. It's a little prudish and definitely not something that I think would really ever bother her.

I really do like this story however it really breaks up the flow for me when right in the middle of a chapter you will insert an authors note. Those are definitely best saved for the end of the chapters as opposed to in the middle. Also in the future for your other stories you might want to consider putting your authors notes in bold text. That way it's a clear indicator that the chapter is over. Overall though I really do enjoy the story and I really like the way that you are bringing the characters about