Very well written. I like the theme used in this fiction especially, because it connects well with the G.U. series that came out long after this was written; particularly about the players being the ones to change the game, and not an AI.

Sugoy! One of may favorites in .hack section!

Very good!

This story was incredible and very touching. The Kenji and Akira scene were very nice, they were just so fluffy (in a very good way).

This story really showed off your talent (which is amazing by the way) as a writter. The way you descride many of the scenes made me feel like I was right there, you paint a great picture with your writing. Your story structure and flow where good as well.

Thank you for writing this story, because I really enjoyed reading it.

It's so hard to find a good .hack/ fanfic (especially one that isn't abandoned or incomplete), but I've been pleasently surprised so far with this one.

Amazing story it was an awesome read.

The story as a whole definitely did not disappoint me. I've read some of your other stories, and I'm quite impressed. :) You're a brilliant writer, and I hope you keep writing awesome stories.

Ps. I loved the internal connections you made between characters. None of the relationships or plot events were too over the top. For a piece of fan fiction, it sure turned out very realistic. Sweet job!

interesting

Great fic. It was very well done.

I understand you wrote this before we knew Mireille was Mistral's daughter and that Shuugo and Rena were Kazu and Akira's old neighbors (Rena had a crush on Kazu).

Excellent.

Cute story! Too bad some people go nuts when they get a little power. Is there going to be a sequel with an explanation of the star & light flash?

Amazing! It kept me riveted and everyone was IC! The baby should have been called Kite!

Wow, what a great story. I read half of this yesterday, and only put it down when I felt tired. Great story! You did a wonderful job advancing the characer's personalities - I felt like Kite was still Kite, but it was a Kite that benefited from being more experienced, etc. The characters really grew up beliavebly, and I love that they were still recognizale yet more advanced. I also found it interesting that Bith turned out - well, the way he did. I wouldn't have thought of C.C. Corp giving him a job like that. :)

Beautiful. Just beautiful! what an awsome/wonderful/touching story!

You dont find very many AWASME fanfics about future stuff with the .hackers but oh well! This one IS !

In otherwords, I LOVED THIS STORY! _

Wonderful. I can't give you higher praise.

Actually, Mistral's baby was a girl named Mirei, who plays as Mireille in /Legend of the Twilight Bracelet, also known as /Udeden.

But I like Sasuke too, and you preobably didn't know at the time of typing this. _

Fourteen hours... so they're on the Wesy Coast? I like to think Japan, not as fourteen hours ahead, but one day forward and 7hours back. D