Reviews for Ordinary
mintyroses chapter 3 . 3/16/2019
OMG WTH! I was not expecting this omg. I legit got goosebumps as it ended whaaattttt. I loved it, this was actually so good. I admit, when I read the bit where Chad was saying that he KILLED 30c I was legit so shook. But wow, you ARE good at angsty stuff. Like please make more or like a prequel to this? kind of if that makes sense, to see how things got this far! That would be awesome! But I know this was written years and years ago so you've probably forgotten all about it. Either way, I wish there was more written about this couple. They're legit my fave right after 5x4
mintyroses chapter 4 . 7/2/2018
These were literally the cutest one-shots ever. Except for the other one - I really like how you switch from angsty to cute, it's awesome to see the difference in character. Plus you write awesomely xDD I wish I could do the same but I can't! HAHA. Anyway, I've never actually thought of this pairing before but thinking about it, there's potential there and I can see how cute they could be xDD
kndgeek chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
um...fyi, when KND operatives turn thirteen, they are kicked out and "decommissioned", aka they GET THEIR MEMORIES OF THEIR TIME IN THE KND ERASED! They essentially become like any other teenager. Also, Chad is not nice to kids openly. Why do you think Cree, formerly Numbuh 11 and one of the best KND operatives ever, is always trying to ATTACK THEM?
SunAndMoonGuardian chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Loving the one-shot
creativesm75 chapter 4 . 11/26/2006
good one-shots!
BabyGooGoo2 chapter 4 . 5/8/2005
aww, that was sweet too. Where've you been? We need more one-shots. Come on! lol
Deadly Tears chapter 4 . 5/1/2005
That was so sweet! I really hope you find the time to update again. _
cathylovesyou chapter 4 . 4/29/2005
i love this story! keep going~ i love this pairing, and i love abby! please hurry and finish up! i'm desperate!
DyingStar chapter 4 . 4/29/2005
Oh my god, I love this idea. I love you, for writing it. Really, these stories are like...whoa! They are really well composed.

When I first clicked on this collection, I was kinda confuzzled on who Number 247 was. The kid with the blonde hair, who's parents were like beating up other KND so he could have a smaller number? Is that him? Cuz if it is, I can really see him and Abby hooking up. So sweet.

The first chapter was very put together. I liked how it was SHE who had gotten kicked out before anyone else had, because that was how I always saw it. And it really made me smile when Chad showed up and they started talking and when he KISSED her...Man that was just dreamy :)

The second chapter was very real and it hit a familiar stich in me. I liked how you went all in about the crush he had on her and how much he really, really liked her and couldn't think about anyone else. The ending was sad, a little quick, but I was happy for Chad.

The third chapter, I think, was my favorite. It just blew my mind. People killing or commiting suicide for love always gets me-I love that kind of plot. I thought it was really sincere and deep how you set that chapter up. But I'ma have to admit, I don't know who Numbuh 30c is, lol. The end, was really bittersweet though. Very beautiful.

This chapter was so cute. I can imagine Abby being all shy and whatnot and Chad being the 'cool' one, having to hold up the conversation. And I liked the part when he said: I have a crush on you too, Abby. And the whole he was her hero thing. Very nice.

All in all, I dig this story collection, from what I've seen of your writing, it rocks, and I think you should update. Like soon :)
bizarro4 chapter 3 . 11/6/2004
wow, great one-shots! the first one is very sweet, in the second, Chad seems to be getting unhinged, then all-out loses it in the third! (not really out of character, he did try to murder everyone in END, after all) you do write great angst. it's funny, i always thought 30C and Chad were old friends, but here...not so much friendly. :D
Deadly Tears chapter 3 . 11/3/2004
I love angsty situations! Chad killed 30c because 30c was going to marry Abby. I still feel sorry for Chad, though.

Anyway, hope you make more Chad/Abby oneshots. They're great!
Deadly Tears chapter 2 . 11/3/2004
This was another cute one-shot! I'm guessing that the smile on Nigel's face at the end probably meant that Abby also had a crush on Chad.

Anyway, nicely done!
Deadly Tears chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
Numbuh 5/Chad is a cute couple; Great one-shot!
Numbuh 9gtG chapter 3 . 11/3/2004
I LOVE THIS! You have to keep writing!
BabyGooGoo2 chapter 3 . 11/2/2004
ok, .now let's bring on some more!
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