I absolutely love this story. I read it years ago, but am glad I found it again. Thanks for sharing this story and filling in the gaps of what happened on their road trip. I really enjoyed reading it again.

I always wondered what might have happened on the cross country trip! Loved your version of the trip!

Absolutely brilliant story! Well done.

Really nice.
Congratulations

pretty excellent story so far really want to know what is going to come so please update soon

good story couldn’t stop reading it really did like it is sad it is over

it was fun and excited. i enjoyed reading it. i read 4 times already and am still enjoying it. you are a good writer. am a fan of Felcity and Ben. i hope you write more about them . thank you for this

this was great really liked.

I have just started watching this show on Netflix and found this FanFic. This is seriously GOOD. You truly NAILED the characters, from their speech to their mannerisms. As I read the story, I could see the characters acting out the words. I just have to say, you're very talented and I'm excited to read the rest of the chapters.

I hated to come to the end of this. Kurt is a total arse. Shelly is awesome and I'm reduced to one liners...

Alright let's start again, I thoroughly enjoyed the road trip loved the descriptions of Yellowstone and the wierd tourist attractions along the way. I thought YES when Felicity semi confronted Kurt, I think it was neccesary.

This was fantastic because life doesn't always go smoothly there's always bumps in the road, there always stupid misunderstandings and I like how you've dealt with that.

I never wanted this to end :(

this makes me feel... I remember having moments like this when cursed by thoughts you look at someone and in that moment it all falls into place and believing in love, in perfection is easy.

God you captured it perfectly. Kudos

this is great I think I've come across this before, good writing always leaves residual footprints! anyways I needed to review to tell you I love this, the writing, character description, plot. I love Hero Ben I love that he got protective of her and it gave me warm fuzzies. I enjoyed the first well second kiss and Ben's impulsiveness definitely something that he would do.

Fantastic :)

Just had to tell you how glad I am for finding this story. I love FAB! It's been way too long since I've experienced their connection. This chapter was great. You nail their awkward sexual tension so well. It brings me back to the good ol days! -Rece

You write extremely well. I loved the story and how the voices of the characters were consistent with the characters that I have come to love from the TV show. I would love to read more of your work.

This was an awsome story! I am off to see if you have written anything else that will strike my fancy!