| Reviews for Unbalanced Pendulum |
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   RanTracer chapter 17 . 2/8/2017 The detail. Both for the crude and the adorned. I loved this! and I love your writing. Thank you for writing at least this much, it was a pleasure to read. |
| Enjeru chapter 17 . 8/8/2013 Type your review for this chapter here... |
| Paper lantern18 chapter 17 . 12/30/2011 not sure i there is another chapter but if there is please update soon... |
| RandomDream chapter 17 . 11/23/2009 This has been one of the best AU demon fics out there. The writing is really commendable. I just hope that you pick this up again and continue it. Thank you. |
| Yoko Fujioka chapter 17 . 5/27/2009 Not the best fanfict I've ever read, but a lot better than I could probably ever I like how i go through so many emotions as I'm reading this (Karasu rapes Hiei)[small nosebleed] (Hiei rapes Kurama)O.0 [huge gushing nosebleed] (Hiei talks about his past) Hiei-chan! Also , i have an idea, but it's not that good :What if this was all a flashback/ dream that Kurama has right before fighting Karasu in the finals?I have no idea how i got this idea, but please tell me whether you like it or you for listening to my odd rambling that got me so many friend(sarcasm!)and please update soon! Yoko-I'm sorry for the short notice, but I will be unable to write any more fanficts because I short-circuited my computer when I got a nosebleed and gushing you for understanding! All my fans(more sarcasm)-YAAY! Yoko-Some fans you are...[mumble mumble] |
| mYtORnsaNDaLs chapter 17 . 4/23/2009 why leave us like this? i can't really believe some authors sometimes... please have some mercy and try not to kill us in anticipation...please do update... it would do be good to our health... nice story! |
| Sano chapter 17 . 10/6/2008 no! Although this is truly twisted and everything, I just love it! write more please! |
| KKCSCOGUNMA chapter 17 . 10/3/2007 Woo! This is some work of art! Good Hiei x Yoko fics are hard to find...great Hiei x Yoko fics are like needles in a makai haystack! But you, my dear, have a lovely, silver needle right here! The plot's originality is amazing- despite the whole Yoko/Kuronue beings lovers before Hiei coming on the scene, I've never seen a fic even a grain similar to this. The vivid way in which you describe your images is so realistic sometimes i have to literally 'pull' myself out of the fic's depths. The sheer emotion radiating from Hiei and Yoko is heartbreaking- and Karasu is as evil and deadly as he should be, without being the sterotypical yaoi, 'mwahaha' baddy! Words fail me beyond this point! But my ultimate congrats to you on this fine piece of work- and update when you can please! |
| Asura Mori chapter 16 . 4/4/2007 What the hell does Angra mean? I like the name Hiei so much better! |
| Asura Mori chapter 15 . 4/4/2007 I got that part, with the crow and Karasu... though some people say he's a bat demon, others say he's a crow demon... WHICH ONE IS HE? |
| Asura Mori chapter 14 . 4/4/2007 Whoa, bad Hiei! I consider that as rape... even if Kurama liked it! |
| Asura Mori chapter 13 . 4/4/2007 BAD YOKO! DOWN BOY! |
| Asura Mori chapter 12 . 4/4/2007 Hehe, makes you wonder what Hiei plans on REALLY doing with Kurama. Good chapter! |
| Asura Mori chapter 11 . 4/4/2007 Yay, happy ending to that chapter! Sorta... |
| Asura Mori chapter 10 . 4/4/2007 Is it just me or does Hiei seem to like pissing everybody off? Lol, good chapter, though I don't like the sound of Kura-kun's torment. *whimper* |
