| Reviews for Virtual Reality |
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  shru chapter 2 . 9/26/2004 Hun, you seem to have your tenses and genders mixed up. is heero seeing a boy or a girl? if he told everyone he saw a girl, then why would wufei say 'boy'? its kinda confusing, unless its meant to be like that, but i don't feel that's the case. |
 pattyard chapter 9 . 9/25/2004 Sorry It took me so long to review,I found your story very well written, you are a talented writer..I thought that this was or is an excellent story. . I am always reading drama or humor stories depending on what mood I'm in and I found this one of the few good one's out there. So I thank you for writing this story for me and everyone else to again please update soon.. NOTE: If you find the same review for more than one chapter of your story, It is because I just go home and read everything in my in box and have done another mass review ...But believe me I mean every word of this review and want to read more of everyone's stories..._~ |
| pattyard chapter 3 . 9/25/2004 Sorry It took me so long to review,I found your story very well written, you are a talented writer..I thought that this was or is an excellent story. . I am always reading drama or humor stories depending on what mood I'm in and I found this one of the few good one's out there. So I thank you for writing this story for me and everyone else to again please update soon.. NOTE: If you find the same review for more than one chapter of your story, It is because I just go home and read everything in my in box and have done another mass review ...But believe me I mean every word of this review and want to read more of everyone's stories..._~ |
| pattyard chapter 2 . 4/30/2004 This is a verry good story please update,update,update,update now... |
| Tattooed-On-My-Memory chapter 2 . 4/29/2004 hmm. I like it, makes you think. Anyway, I hope you can update soon! I really look forward to reading the next chapter! |
| aspara chapter 2 . 4/28/2004 . . . eh? |
| rosedreams chapter 2 . 4/28/2004 You keep switching genders for Duo during the content. You are not using details, but jumping from action to action w/out smoothing the transition. You need a beta. |
| Funny Bunny chapter 2 . 4/28/2004 Meies likies, updaties soonies! |
| Tattooed-On-My-Memory chapter 1 . 4/19/2004 _ I like it! It's a really cool idea! hope you update soon! |
| Tica chapter 1 . 4/18/2004 This story looks really interesting! hope to see more of it soon! |
