Reviews for Black
Fallon Monroe chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
I...like it. No, no I don't. I absolutely love it. I'm not sure if it's by fried mind, considering I have a headache and am tired, but I absolutely adore this fanfic. It captivated me in a way I'm not really quite sure of. Would I like/enjoy this fanfic when I'm not half dead, most likely. Would it have captured my attention quite as much, maybe not.

Either way, this is really good. Love the fic.

~Fallon
CleverCloggs235 chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
OMG! such a gd gd gd story!
SilverDrama chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Wow..that was powerful writing. You obviously thought this out, whereas other fanfiction had no thought. This had incredible wording:

Bella has sunk into darkness. Regulus is dead, and now Sirius is dead, too. Narcissa is married to the soul of the darkness. And I...I am not a Black anymore.

That was powerful...incredible...I'm speechless

-Cherry-
Keziah chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
Intriguing...very good. I like the way you portrayed the family!
Alana-Lou chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Its so poignant, i cant decide if its out of character or not... but excellent all the same
RandomInsanity42 chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
I love how you depict the Black family.

'Bella has sunk into darkness. Regulus is dead, and now Sirius is dead, too. Narcissa is married to the soul of the darkness. And I...I am not a Black anymore.'

Powerful. Very powerful. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

-RandomInsanity42
fallen-angel-scorn chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
That was excellent! I myself play Andromeda in an RPG and this is dead on how I've portayed her. scary... But still, good job!
DragonGrin - former TeenTypist chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
Wow! Really creepy, but really insightful. I really liked this piece.
butterflyer chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
That was really cool and original. I love your writing style.
Lalaithiel Black chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
That was really neat. A great origional idea.
Ieyre chapter 1 . 7/31/2004
Dark and creepy for Andromeda (or at least as most people percieve her), but I like. Very introspective, nice ending.
SiriusGate chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Wow... I never thought of the Black House like that at all. My only question is who is the person writing... Who is that familiar with the house and its occupants.
Cygnet Committee chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
Hello dear. Lovely story. I jsut wanted to tell you i've added your fanfic to the list of exquizite fanfiction on my Black Sisters Fansite ( )
~Darcie
stella chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
amazing(limited vocab here...I must have said that at least ten times)...well.. I love all your stories!
Linaeve chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
"Six dark shadows and a ghost. Bella our vampire and Cissa our ghost. We were a family of monsters.
I grew up in a haunted house."
Brilliant. This was dark and chilling but very lovely. I love the family portraits and the half-open doors and the piano music. Simply lovely.
- Linaeve
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