Took me awile to figure out it wasn't Usagi... Very, very good. I like the meeting with Selene, and the test - love or hatred?

Ah, wonderful. Serenity was so wonderfully characterized- the klutziness, the desperation, her love for Usagi...*hums in pleasure* It had never occured to me that she might know what was going to happen to her daughter and Endymion. A refreshing take on her. Bravo.

What a great story you got there . At first it was kind-of-boring and then at the ending it was amazing . So keep up the good work.

What a beautiful story! I usually think of Queen Serenity as a graceful figure, but you're portrayal of her as... Usagi-ish (for lack of a better term) was perfect.
The only point I would question is the vision being 17 years into the future. If Serenity hasn't found anyone to love yet or had a marriage arranged for her, she still has that, plus at least nine months of pregnancy to go through. Unless the Lunarians don't carry that long? That's at least one year, more likely two. That would make the princess only 14 or 15. I think she's supposed to be at least 16 when the Silver Millenium ended, but I'm not sure.
Otherwise, a great story!
Raya