I like this story. Any plans for a sequel?

Conniving little elf. I really love her.

I'm also pleased to see Harry and Severus getting along better, and I think you've done well with getting them to open up and be nicer to each other.

The storry is somewhat interesting, concerning building trust and relations. However, I should say that the author says "sorry" to much. It is fine if it takes a lot of time. Just wish you more strength and will to write, because you are doing fine.

DID ANY ONE DO A SEQUEL

Great story! Plzz write a sequel!

Mostly a good story, though there's a few points I've come across so far where you were calling a lack of knowledge 'arrogance'-which is something entirely different.

One thing I want to comment on, though, is that it's awfully strange how you're building the story to essentially be a man with NO emotional control trying to teach a teenaged boy how to have it (considering Snape's temper, he couldn't be a master at Occlumency, and only Rowling's later explanation that it had all been a front, not truth, actually explained how he could be one)...You might have wanted to build into your story that he actually had that emotional control and stopped trying to antagonize Harry in his own home, and this whole scenario would be a lot more believable. He could still be a harsh task-master, stern, and strict without being angry six ways from Sunday nearly all the time.

One of d best stories so far
Snape was so in character!
Sequel plzz

i love your story pls update soon

Hi Rhiannon,

I loved your story. Why does it end here?! The characters of Severus and Harry where really like in the book. I also loved the change they where going through, when the story progressed. I loved the scene when Harry hugged Snape. Why did you stop writing here?! What's with Hermione? Does she belief Harry's lies? How will Snape treat Harry in class and in the special lessons? Does Harry come to Snape again next summer or for Christmas? Was there a time when James treated Snape different?
I don't think that Snape really hated James. I think he loved his younger brother and was just hurt (that's what your text sounds like to me). I had liked a memory where you could see that (if my interpretation was right).
Your idea of Snape and James being twins was awesome. It makes a special connection between them.

Write more, please, please, please! (after all I was a good kid and wrote you a really looong review!)

Yours Ebenbild

has anyone mentioned the fact that the title should be revelations, not revalations? unless it's a witty play on words that I haven't come across yet in your fic...?

Just awesome. If you ever get inspired again just write because your a wicked writer!

wow that was a good change, i am so tired looking at harry is snape son, i can't stand it, but i like how u made them relate to eachother some how with out adoption papers)

YAY for compassionate!Snape

That's so sad. I love Severus...

hey this is an awesom story! i kind of like caring sevvy :)