so interesting!

Two days. This story took me two days to read. Would have been faster but I was reading other things as well as living in the real world. Well done.

amazing

Oh. Poor Siri.

Wrong age at the Black sisters (Bellatrix has already graduated when the Marauders is 11, Andromeda was probably 7th year or graduated and I think Narcissa was fifth year), but otherwise this was amazing too.

Loved it a lot. And I don't like that cousin of James'. Gah.

Well, Andromeda was a Slytherin too, but otherwise this too was amazing.
Short of being spoiled? James is definitely spoiled... -
Love this.

Oh Merlin. This... I just found this and I already LOVE it. This first chapter was GREAT. If the rest of the story keeps the same quality it will be amazing to read. Everything was truly fantastic. Now I am going to read chapter 2. Wow.

I appreciated the fight between Sirius and James, it seemed to echo Harry and Sirius' fist fight on their first encounter in "The Prisoner of Azkaban" and was masterfully done.

I loved this story so much! You made all the events sound very believable and I loved the whole thing with Sirius' family. You kept the story telling very consistent for the most part, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!
Now, there were a few discrepancies in your story, but unless I'm mistaken, that's just because not all the books were out when this was written.
Another thing I thought was off was the ending. While the rest of the story stuck very true to the Marauders as a whole, the Stone of Het Lot kind of threw me off... It seemed very odd and rushed, seeing as you covered it in the last two chapters. Nevertheless, this was definitely one of the better stories I've read about them, and I'm thrilled to read your sequel.
Awesome job, and keep doing what you love!

I love your story, your a really good writer.

(jaw drops)
Snapelous?
Whatever happened to Severus?
For that matter, whatever happened to him being a halfblood with an alcoholic/abusive muggle father?

About when Sirius and James met on the Hogwarts Express, I thought that Sirius' father's name was Orion, not Jacob.

i just read your story(though i suppose its a bit late you posted this 7 years ago:)) i absolutely loved it! just like in Falling Star i find your writing style amazing! i'm off to read the sequel know:)

Ohh. I liked this.

Snapelous. SNAPELOUS! HAHAHAHA!

If you stay in Gryffindor...you'll prove the pure-blood fanatics wrong. Don't give up! You're doing so well!