| Reviews for The One Thing You Can't See |
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   8wo3Y4tw chapter 4 . 1/17/2014 This is one of the more touching stories out there. I felt tears start coming to my eyes when that never happens. I see that this hasn't been updated for nearly ten years, but I'm sincerely hoping that it gets continued one day. I really like hoe you portray the characters, and I'm wondering what happened to change the future so that Yue/Yukito died instead of being saved by Sakura and Windy. |
| Aristania chapter 4 . 5/12/2011 Please update and give this story a happy ending before i start to cry again! |
| Blissdreamer chapter 4 . 12/3/2006 Please update, I beg you, please update... Bliss... |
| EverWatchful chapter 1 . 7/15/2004 that was great i actually cried! keep up the good work i loved it hope you update soon. |
| Selcier chapter 4 . 7/1/2004 Okay, that was one of the more depressing stories I've ever read... started crying... But I do hope that you continue on with it. I love your work as an author. -Selcier |
| Reius Devirix chapter 4 . 4/14/2004 Great Story! |
| Askani Blue chapter 4 . 3/27/2004 This is very cool. I like how this is going and I'll be watching for another update. |
| WoLfePaWs chapter 4 . 3/27/2004 I wonder where Yukito/Yue went after he disappeared and how Clow-san is going to find him...I feel sad for Eriol-kun - he had to face the whole thing alone and his guardians weren't by his side...it was a great angst...you have to update soon, I wish to know what happen next |
| Mystic Moon Empress chapter 4 . 3/26/2004 awesome story! really sad tho *sniff sniff poor yue...i hope u update soon ) |
| baka deshi chapter 4 . 3/26/2004 *steps backward, still reeling* Whoa. I must say, the first two chapters were a bit slow, but these latter two went by in a heartbeat. Poor Touya...poor Kero...hell, poor everybody. I especially like how you had Kero go tearing off after Nakuru, thinking he could still find Yue somewhere. And I'm especially interested in seeing what happens next. It takes a lot of guts to kill off a character, and it takes even more to show people's reactions to it. Although it seems like they're taking it pretty well, all told. The last time someone close to me died, I wasn't capable of rational thought for at least an hour, and I hadn't just seen it happen in front of me. The line about Sakura's strength was really sharp there-she does have an inner metal that would help her survive this. Please write more soon, I'm interested in seeing where this goes! |
| TaRe-ChiBi chapter 3 . 3/17/2004 It's so well written! Update it soon, okay? |
| TaRe-ChiBi chapter 1 . 3/17/2004 That's just sad...yuki died... |
| brokenAngelYue chapter 3 . 3/16/2004 ~sob sob sob~ This secenario had gone through my mind a few times. One of those 'what if's' that noone really wants to give voice to. Very well written, and i'm curious as to where you're going with it. A |
| Flora chapter 3 . 3/16/2004 It is really sad but i like this story because it is different. So please continue on it. |
| WoLfePaWs chapter 3 . 3/15/2004 I can already feel the sad atmosphere...this chapter was particularly sad, with Yukito-san's death and all...the saddest part was when he disappeared into thin air...this wait for your update was worth it, you have woven this story quite beautifully, I wonder how your next update would be? Good work, update soon |
