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Not bad at all.

I have never really played D & D, but I like the style that you use.

This seems to be much like what Piers Anthony would do.

I look forward to the next chapters of this story.

I'm really enjoying this story. As both a long time Xanth reader and a gamer, this game is truely unique. I've dm'd games where I take my group into anime's, but never Xanth. Kudo's to your dad (and your party for going along with it). And so you know, yes, I am a female gamer.

I got the horse of a different color and that's all. TELL ME THE OTHERSS!

O..k that was strange. Maybe you should tell us what the puns are in the next chapter to the last chapter are. _

This is great! You must post further!(of course that is provided that there is more to post... :) *smiles hopefully*)

The bellow-yick road. Also, what were the puns in the other chapters.

How ironic that they have to follow the yellow brick road just like in the Wizard of Oz.

I would have to say, although kinda funny, that this story wasnt good for the Xanth books. I found it funny in ways, but it doest mix well for me, especially for the Xanth books. So, from a range of 1-10, 10 being the highest, i would give this a 3.5

I love it. I was just about rolling ont he floor laughing from it, but I hope you get another chapter up soon.

Got 2 out of 3 puns. The harpie's and drew (you) gets carried away.

i am a mojor DD fan, and a major Xanth fan, so i really appreciate this crossover. can't wait to see where it goes. goos work. "creative acquisitionist". lmao D

Hahahahaha! I love your fanfic! I myself always wished I could join a D&D group but I cant find one near where I live :( Your DM sounds so cool! Oh well... Keep on writing!

Whooh! Very...erm...(Insert pun/superlative here)