Reviews for Just Another Year In the Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have enjoyed this very much. I hope you find time to finish it someday as I would love to read the ending:) |
![]() ![]() Story is incomplete. Author apparently quit making any sense, and gave up. |
![]() ![]() I think Kingsley may have already died in this story. The kids watched him fall during a battle in town. |
![]() ![]() I have no idea what you are talking about at the end of this chapter. Rings, clothes, burning days, etc. Parts of this makes sense, but overall it is very confusing. Albus has been dead three days, not 4 weeks, but is it him reminiscing or Severus or who? Did you accidentally jump into first person again? Is this a passage from another story that got cut and pasted into this one? "I thought he was being facetious, and ignored the warning. I should have known better. It was during my fourth week of classes when I realized that my robes had caught fire, but that is not all. The flames were fuchsia. It became a grand tradition, so that every year on my birthday Albus would transfigure my present fuchsia-colored. I was not pleased." |
![]() ![]() You switched to first person narrative for a moment, putting yourself in Harry's place: "Just as Severus pulled me to my feet, Fawkes landed on my shoulder and began to sing. It was a sad song, but in the end gave us a hopeful feeling in our chests." |
![]() ![]() ![]() i truly loved this story if you do an update or sequel please send me the link |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to be updating this story anytime soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update again soon. I have really enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a wonderful fic and I hope that you will continue to update it again soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so sweet... i'll finish reading the rest later. but you haven't updated for two years! when r u going 2 update this story and y our star trek story? i luv 'em both! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story. I hope you finish it. Thanks for writing and sharing your stories with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() gah! more! please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() If this is complete in another archive, I'd like to know so I can go read the ending. I've enjoyed the story so far. |
![]() ![]() Please update this story again soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() bringing Voldermort back is rather lame and it has been done to death please try something fresh and new please |