Reviews for Sunlight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cant tell you how much I adored this! it is amazing! please write more... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice Drabble. I like how harry is non-chalant about the whole thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) you really should right more H/G. it makes me squee. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short and sweet; one of my favorite types of fics. :) |
![]() ![]() Amazing. I think what makes your fics soo good are the details harry and ginny notice about each other in the relationship, personalities and physical appearance. ALso, I think all 4 of them are soo in character. Again it was just beautiful and soo touching. I love your style of writing. You are a really talented writer. |
![]() ![]() aww... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Ron. No, I know, I know, I'm supposed to comment on how in-character Harry is (which he is) and how well you wrote Ginny (which you did), but ... I loved your portrayal of Ron. Two sentences, and wow. "You keep staring at my sister," Ron informs him one day in the library. Heheh. Perfect. I can *see* that. Wow. And really, Harry and Ginny were very well done. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! When I saw how short this one-shot was, I expected it to be...well, nonsense. But I was pleasantly surprised. Why? Because of your use of details; it makes the fic. All the details Harry notices about Ginny are very sweet, but what gets me the most is how you portray what he notices about her PERSONALITY. Like the way she shares jokes with him with just a look (which is very IC). The way she hides History grades from her parents. The image of her sitting outside by the lake, but only when it's very cold outside. All of it rings very true with the perception of IC Ginny that I have. So...good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so on a reviewing spree. Hope you don't mind-but what author would? P Just so you know, I'm not a great fan of Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione, and the like, but your fics make me believe they're meant to be-forgive me, clumsily put. "He wonders if it's healthy, to pay this much attention to somebody's hair." |
![]() ![]() cute! pure cuteness! aw . . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm, before ron starts talking, that could be a very interesting start to a L/J fic. U may just have to write one like it. I myself am *trying* to, keyword trying. I'm very lazy, you see. :) keep up the good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely beautifully written. Perfectly descriptive words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() suddenly i remember whats so special about Harry and Ginny...;) and do you take 'challenge words' from any body or is there come sort of a form to fill out? O.o lol. good work. |